This style was so different I almost didn't read it. Actually, I remember reading it when it was only two chapters in. It was odd and I thought it was just for some kind of...contest.
Anyways, I was pulled in after awhile, wondering what would happen when he actually met/talked to the girl. And then what she would do in return.
Long, predictable, story short, I fell for Alec. Alec Bradshaw.
(He's no match for Butch, and certainly not better than Vaughn, but I love him. )
And that ending was too romantic haha. I always love kisses in the rain~
I'd love to quote and such, love, but Vaughn's not letting me. :)
You write beautifully, poetically even. Eloquence isn't something you come by everyday and you have a true way with words. The plot line is standard, but good. All in all I love it. XD, Britt
LUSH. =,D Sometime, I will HAVE to re-read that. <3<3 (!) I love the rain. How you use it, y'know- full on effect. It just works. Amazing ending, like a begining in the end.
Seriously, -big hugs for Laura- You are amazing, and you know it =D haha but Alec Bradshaw's better xP
p.s. you forgot to put the "her pov" at the begging at chapter 18..and it was a bit confusing at first...but as soon as i got that it was really nice:]
chapter 12 urggg players! love them or hate them its still an obsession...[i lovee them and hate myself for that:s] lovely chapter.. ohh the "he's a guy" excuse it really is true...am giving it myself sometimes!
chapter 13 my heart ached...seriously:/
i dont think it was a good move to lie "I’d never take advantage of anybody the way he used to do girls."
he could just conceal the thruth..not write lies..
ill be back later with more comments...since i didnt comment at every chapter:p
Oh My... Wow. that's was so amazing. The ending was so beautiful, I started to cry. *blush* kinda embarressing to say, but whatever. *shrug* Absolutly awesome.
aaahh!! mibba totally screwed up! it didn't tell me you'd updated for the past forever! grr.... but! i just caught up on everything i missed, and i must say... i absolutely loved this story! it was amazing! and i can't wait for the sequel! :D
gah! i loved the ending. although, i was hoping you write them getting all hot and heavy. ohh well :D i love this m'dearr. cannot wait to read the sequel! (:
Actually, I remember reading it when it was only two chapters in.
It was odd and I thought it was just for some kind of...contest.
Anyways, I was pulled in after awhile, wondering what would happen when he actually met/talked to the girl. And then what she would do in return.
Long, predictable, story short, I fell for Alec. Alec Bradshaw.
(He's no match for Butch, and certainly not better than Vaughn, but I love him. )
And that ending was too romantic haha. I always love kisses in the rain~
I'd love to quote and such, love, but Vaughn's not letting me. :)