Seeing - Comments

i love this story!!!! its soft, and sweet.

i really like your stories i wish you would continue them.

I love it <3
Keep it up.

& your writing skills are amazazing :3
(yess amazazing lol)

Oh my GOSH! This is really great, keep updating. Your an amazing writer, with great skill. the way you opened the first chapter was break taking. Have you ever thought about writing something to get it published? Because you should.

Ooh she doesn't speak?!
That should make things interesting...
More soon =]

Summery.

The lyrics make me smile. I love Panic At The Disco so much!
The lyrics make me curious too; what type of story is this? Is it a romance that ends well? Is it a heartbreaking romance?

Chapter One.

Daisies and dandelions scattered about my small garden, swaying as the wind swept against their defenseless bodies.

That took my breath away. It's such a beautiful opening.
You my dear have a way with words; I can tell this already!

I don’t know their names, nor do I wish to. I just like watching them. I like them watching me. I like making other people think the way they do.

Beautiful. Pure beauty.

I like the whole tone of this chapter - it's beautifully written.
You my dead are a really good writer.
I can see this by only reading a chapter of this story :cute:.

Okay, I'm confused. Is;

“I really don't think that love truly exists. I think we care immensely for people but that doesn't constitute love. All we want is affection because we're selfish beings who thrive off of attention and affection and eventually we come to care for people simply because they care for us. It's hard to reject someone that you think actually gives a damn about you because in all honesty, you're really all you've got and if you can get someone else, then good for you. But really, I think love is just an idea people made up because we all dream of the hopeless type of affection and care where someone will adore us despite all our flaws, but really, we're human. We see flaws and we find any excuse to exaggerate them because it makes us feel better about our own selves.”

An authors note or something?
Sorry - I got really confused by this...

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On to chapter two tomorrow!

I really like this so far =]

OH EMMMM GEEEEEEE.
i love it.
you know, if brian needs a girlie. (;
UPDATE IT.