Trust Me - Comments

FUUUUUUUUUCK!!! My story has the same title as yours!

CHAPTER 100!! Dedication! I can never keep up with writing seeing as I have a lot to do (':
I'm gonna read the sequel now. I'm so proud of you for getting up to a hundred (:

omg loved this ending :D imma subscribe for thy sequel now~ cant wait to see what happens :D
poor frankie... :(

ok, so i've spent the las several months-i think-reading this and the end of ch 99 i literally was like "holy shit"
this whole story has been very breath taking from the Bob's cancer to the relationships of Gee & Frank and Bob & Ray to Frank's lustfullness/love towards Bob. Then you have Ray almost dying to Bob almost dying, Ray doing drugs, Gerard slipping towards the end. Again, breathtaking
I would very much love a sequel if you wish to write one, given that you are an amazing writer
congrats for writing such an amzing story

GAH. NO MORE UPDATS!?!? WHAT HAS THE WORLD COME TO. I WANT MY RAYY AND BOB.

Holy shit! You've been writing this for THREE WHOLE YEARS! I must say that I am impressed! I shall say, also:

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL.

But first, finish the story!

my. god.
i can't even express my love for this.
i just hope there's a sequel for this
i swear, words can't even describe!
<3!

OH...MY...GOD!!! NOOOOOO!! this can't be happening! It was all going so good! gah fix it! please!!

NO! Bob was DREAMING????
And FUCKING LOL at my first comment ever... July 29th 2007. Almost three years ago. The good times, aye?
I WANNA READ THE LAST CHAPTER.

Holy crap! YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS, I NEED ANSWERS!

Sequel will have first chapter up very soon :D

Um, so I kinda sorta hate you for this chapter. Just sayin'. But it was soooooooooooo good! I've been waiting forever for this. I want the next chapter but I don't want the story to end. Are there any plans for a sequel?

The first thing I noticed for this chapter (99) was that it was noticeably shorter. I take it this is because it is being wrapped up soon? And then onto a sequel? Or epilogue? What you were saying to me in the comments about making the sequel about Frank and Gerard is a wonderful idea. That could even be wrapped up in a three chapter epilogue if you so wished.

WHOA! WHOA WHOA WHOA! WHAT? -keeps reading-
You mean… The bus crash two years ago… He had all of what happened after that as a DREAM!? What the hell. Okay… He better be dreaming about it being a dream! For real. Though, I do not believe that is how your mind is working. And that is perfectly alright. You have me on the edge of my seat with anticipation, dear. I do quite hope you the last chapter up soon.

Then again. The sooner the chapter is up, the sooner this story is over. D:

Stay beautiful like your writing!
<333

I apologize for not commenting on this earlier this year...
I had an extremely long hiatus of not reading anything and hardly writing much of anything. =/

This story has never ceased to amaze me at all. I literally just began reading again and your story was the first one that I knew I HAD to catch up in. Your style is unique and your use of words, incredible. You capture your characters beautifully. Just reading chapter 97 just now... Gerard is straight? Well, this is a twist of events! That is another thing you are phenomenal at: plot twists.

Okay, since I'm finally caught up in this now, I will give you a full comment on Chapter 98. Sound good? Mmkay, here we go:

Wow, Bob has been in the hospital for two months? I suppose with something as serious as he went through, it would take a while. Thank you for being realistic with the situation you have set up for yourself.

The fact that Frank and Ray are living together for the sake of sanity sounds like something my friend Ashley and I would do if one of us had our own place. Just reminds me of the two of us. Annnnnd then cue the naked roommate. That would probably be me in the situation. Hahaha. So far, this is starting off as a very humorous chapter. I'm quite enjoy the atmosphere of your writing right now.

Ray's anxiousness is something I've experienced with my grandfather and his cancer. Just waiting for him to be able to come home was horrible. But he made it and is cancer free for now. :)

Thank you for focusing a little on Gerard and Frank. I feel that if the chapter had just been on Bob and Ray, there wouldn't have been much to it. You have good balance within your writing. And the way Ray deals with baby Angel was just so sweet! I'm sure that in reality, he will make an excellent father when he finally decides to have kids. :)

I'm almost to the end but there was just one error just now.

The numbness on the right side of Bobs body was much better, but he had had to learn to walk again after completely losing the use of his right leg after his surgery.
"The" as opposed to "to".

WOOHOO! I finished the chapter. I'm very eager to know what happens next. I honestly believe that you should decided on whether you feel a sequel will be necessary. Your job is to entertain the readers but be true on what you want to do and how you want to do it. I would be okay with ending this at 100 with maybe a nice epilogue sometime. But a sequel would be cool too.

I hope you get Chapters 99 and 100 up soon. Because I'm dying to know what happens next. Time to put it into gear, love and do it to it. <333

I loved it!
Sorry I commented so late, my laptop crashed.
I would love an update!
I would also love a sequal.

D:
2 chapters to go?
aww. im going to miss this story...
yay hes finally going home!
and i hope gerard grows up and realises what hes throwing away...
update sooon? :)

hay there. Sequel is up to you. I love this story. I think I have read it like 5 times just to keep me up to date on everything. It's great. Sequel would be nice but like I said, up to you. One thing. I hope Gerard can pull his head out of his ass and get his act together. Dumb shit.

Poor Frank.

This is honestly SUPER good. :)

BTW just wondering has the whole fact that Frank and Bob hooked up been revealed yet?
or is that still about to happen?

oh and make things better between frank and gerard and frank and mikey as well as ray and mikey and ray and gerard ^.^

i'm trying to help u get 900 for a sequel!!!! love this story so much!