My Last Tour With My Brother Brian Schechter - Comments

Sorry for being M.I.A. but school started and I'm incredibly swamped with school, but I will try to get new chapters out on the weekends.

Thank you for all your support, love to all.

oxox D.B. Becky

DamnRightILoveMCR:

Yay! I like it!
This chapter was really, really good! I hope my last comment didn't offend you or anything hehe.

This chapter was: Hot, cute and good! Very good!
More soon please! :cute:

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Alex.

Alex AKA DamnRightILoveMCR of course it didn't offend me! I did ask for suggestions, and anything that my readers what and I can give to them I will do it. So I should be thanking you for the suggestion, anyways more hotness and cuteness to come!!! *drools* :yah

Yay! I like it!
This chapter was really, really good! I hope my last comment didn't offend you or anything hehe.

This chapter was: Hot, cute and good! Very good!
More soon please! :cute:

x

Alex.

woot woot!!! Can't wait for more

so glad they got together i cant wait for the next one!

Loved the update!! Can't wait for more!!

Thanks a lot to all my readers for your oh so lovely comments!!!

And to DamnRightILoveMCR thanks so much for your support, and don't worry I get what you wrote, so I'll put it on the next chapters.

Keep loving my story!!! <3

I think this story deserves way more than only 6 comments! Come on readers!
I know that I jump for joy whenever I get comments...

Anyways, to your story. This chapter was really, really good.. but a little thing you could think about is: When someone says something like "Jennifer said Yay, I like icecream!" you can make the "yay, I like icecream"-part in italics or bold text.

Dear god I hope that made sense! Haha.
This story is really good! Can't wait for the next update! This chapter was cute :cute:

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Alex.

This story is so cute XD

I like it!
I like it a lot!

Really good story, keep it up!

Great story!! Update soon!!

this story is amazing i cant wait for more!

Awesome!!! Can't wait for more!!