Soldier on the Corner - Comments

I really loved the line "I wonder if where Anna and Sara are there are flowers too." It's such a simple thought, but given the story, it was very touching and thought-provoking.
And I agree with Box of Chocolates, I love the way you word things.

I'm commenting... are you now happy? :) It;s a little short but still pretty good. I'm still in love with your wording

I agree with Whoaishly Lame, the idea sounds beautiful in a creepy weird way. :) I just hope it comes out nicely, and so far I'm loving the grammar and paragraphing skills you have. ^_^

ho ly crap!!!!! DANA when did u become a writer!? how come i did not know about this!?!?!?! I am so gonna have a talk with you tomorrow. Hurry up and write more!

Dana its such a good start, ur doing rlly well u may not even need my help :)

Wow, this is going to be a really controversial story.
I have to say, the idea of love flourishing in the time of destruction and death is very beautiful. I'm excited to see what you might pull out of that hat of yours with this story.