Wish You Were Here - Comments

YES!!! I finally can get around to reviewing this applause worthy story. Luna and Brandon were soulmates... point blank. They always belonged to eachother. I liked Rob but he wasn't Brandon. I'm glad they both went for what their hearts truly desired. True love always prevails!!! Ooooh and that little smut scene at the end, you know I liked that lol. You make me proud as punch. Mr. and Mrs. Boyd! Hurray! Thank you for writing this and for inspiring me as writer as well. I love you very much. Can't wait for more from you. xo

I honestly ADORED both of these parts - the ending AND the epilogue. However, I think the part that made me sigh the most was “Is it perfect for you Luna?” Brandon asked, his feet tangled in hers. I could definitely envision Brandon being rude about asking this, but being genuine in his concern for trying to show Luna just how much this would cost them. I don't know how else to explain it, but it definitely made me do a little dance on my bed that my roommate kind of stared at me with this odd expression on her face.

“No but Luna thought she was. My mom was always very hippie-esque. Where as Luna’s mother was very much a yuppie. She kind of reminded me of Hilary Clinton now that I look back.”
This entire conversation between Luna and Brandon made me smile with joy at how close and familiar they are to one another, but the outside world would totally do a little "what the hell?" double take at their conversations. It's almost as if they're absorbed in their own little fictitious reality that they don't bother to explain the conventions to anyone else. And Hilary Clinton as a mother? I totally find nothing wrong with Luna's mom being an elderly babe.. in her own cynical/serious way, of course.

But the whole showdown was definitely what I did NOT expect. I was half hoping Rob would get into Brandon's space and take him down for stealing his woman, but then I was cringing at the idea of Brandon's beauty being ruined. :O Ha, but truthfully, I am glad you chose them to be relatively civilized and calm about the situation at hand, particularly since Luna was never Rob's woman to begin with. I loveloveloved their little quarrel and am very enamored with the ending you chose.<3

And Mrs. Boyd?! Ah, yes.. our man finally settled down for a luxurious and glamorous doll! I'm satisfied. You did such a magnificent job with this story that I am TOO eager to engulf myself in your next captivating romance for our leading man! Bravo, my darling. I do wish you could hear my applause for this story and how simplistic, yet intricately, awe-inspiring this tale was. I think you are quite a writer and I only am eager for the next installation of your words!

I know a girl at my school with the last name Boyd. When I found that out I screamed her last name in class. Everyone looked at me weird. I wonder what her fathers name is?

And I LOVED the ending. Mrs. Boyd [; sooooo cute. This story completes my life. <3333

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! I'm glad I got to hear half the chapter on the phone while I was in CVS the other night :D

Naughty naughty people... Is it totally wrong that I feel bad for Rob??? It seems like his only flaw right now is that he isn't Brandon. Oh, the perils of love... Well I'm psyched for the next chapter but equally sad that it will end.... But I'm terribly excited for your next story! I don't think anyone will know what hit them with that one. I get a little tickle in my belly just thinking about it!

I love ya, baby girl! xo

Only one more chapter left? Sequal. Totally make another story off of this one because this story.. completes me. No. Well possibly ;D

I loved the ending to this! I love hearing their music on the radio. But Not when I'm driving.. their music is always on the radio on just about every station where I live and I still go crazy when their songs play! Like CRAZY. I literally run the car off the road and crash into mail boxes. Shh don't tell.

Oh cruel fate, how must you torment me like this?! Gah, the lovers reunited and ignite their flame once more! I love how much Luna questions herself; I sympathize with her pain for being enamored with Brandon, but bound to Rob. I particularly love how I can envision all the scenery now that I have finally visited Venice Beach for the first time in my life! Too beautiful and captivating, much like this story! :) I wish there was an audio bit to insert for the magnitude of applause you deserve.

And much thank you and apologies for the author's note. I've had absolutely NO time to write the next installment, but after how much you've updated.. I am going to begin tonight! And I might have a small surprise for you and my other lover, of course! ;)

I adore you twinsy, I anxiously await the next update while I peruse my mind for the next chapter I must hectically write in your honor!

*drools and falls over* I love your updates. I moved (for the 5th time in about a year. but not really.) and couldn't find some wires to set up my computer. I've gone what seems like years without my computer and the first thing I do is check mibba! In english class I noticed something.. in our school everyone has to have a macbook and while I looked around almost the whole class was on mibba! & I know for a fact that every girl in my school has a little obsession with Incubus.. So I have a feeling some are on here commenting as well. If not then just reading and not commenting. Hmm :P

P.S. Luna's picture kind of reminds me of Laura Palmer from Twin Peaks. It has that Twin Peaks vibe. How incredibly random for me to share... Carry on then.

Alright, I'm going to say this first because I think it's important for me to say... You are an incredible writer. Point blank. Don't you ever doubt yourself or your writing abilities. If you were such a bad writer, trust me that I would not be wasting my time reading your story and praising you for it. There is only room for improvement NOT self pity. So let's get over this and take that negative energy and turn it into something useful... Like maybe writing another fantastic chapter to this story or adding to the other masterpiece you've been working on.

I'm so excited to see what will happen with Luna and Brandon. I have a feeling about something but I won't say it lol. Anyway... I love you and all your dedications. They make my heart sing!

xoxo

Finally an update but so short! I'm anticipating the conclusion along with a new story, please don't make us wait so long! Don't let anyone make you second guess yourself, only you can set your own limits. Personally I love your writing. Even within that short update I could sense the electricity between the main characters and it left me wanting more.

I was listening to Punch Drunk around the end. It kind of matched, I guess.. :)

You updated!!!! <3

i liked it but i was hoping for soo much more after all that texting missy!!!!!
so wheres the rest? i want MOREEEE

Ah yes, the power of phones with vibrating and giving me awesome email news with a subscription update! Yaaay! I really lo-lo-lo-LOVED this update, you can almost feel the pain Luna bound herself into -- locked between loving Brandon, but trying to make him into a distant memory of her past. I truly loved this update, I sometimes want to shake Brandon and Luna and stick them in a room together and plead for a merciful reunion! :)

Anyway, a dedication to me?! WOW! I am truly honored twinsy, I really am.

This was definitely worth the wait. I've been feverishly writing the next update, which is going to terribly hurt us all. But I rather love the complexion between these two, whilst the one with Jolie and Brandon hurts my heart to write.

I love you darling! If I could insert a standing ovation here, I would have about five million of them!

Wow. I absolutely adored this chapter! Worth the wait, babe. But I promise it was hardly that long of a wait considering how long I make you girls wait on me :/ I'll post something before the long weekend. Thank you so much for the dedication... You're a gem <3

ANYWAY... I really like how time has become a factor in this story. Time is a gentle man... or woman haha. She heals all. Slowly but surely. I can't wait to see where you go with this.

As a result he created the most beautiful music for a muse he longed to recover but could not recall.

::cries:: My heart! My little black heart! It ached tremendously after that last line. I love it when you make me ache. More soon, lover...

xo

I am so deep down into the pits of Mexico that I got rather lucky to sign on and see this sitting in my inbox! But this update was amazing, I could feel how painful it must have been for Luna to have dealt with Brandon in such a state, but you can feel the warmth that still radiates from the both of them for one another, but they are terrified over the power the other has!

I am anticipating the next update, I hope it is rather soon! I don't know how much longer I take being in Mexico, being left empty handed without seeing something awesome posted when I get a signal every other couple of days!

Hey baby girl... Sorry I've been on hiatus! The real world has me on lock down for real. I can't wait to tell you all about my meet w/ the band and concert. Anyways... Tremendous chapter! I really hate that she started to cry when she saw Brandon. I know it was a shock but c'mon chick keep it together ;) Did our beloved Yaz go home with Ben Kenney? Oooooo bad girl lol. This made me LOL...

“Are you fucking kidnapping me?”

haha oh buzzing Brandon. He's funny. Well, I shouldn't be one to talk but update soon. I'm really looking forward to "The talk"

Love <3

Another die-hard Incubus fan. <3

could have sworn i posted a comment, but i guess not so... here it goes, again.

i loved it! it was worth your late night, and i cant wait to see what happens to them in the morning :D