Omg. I just read the entire thing. Wow. This story is really really good. ^^ I cried at the notes and reasons. So saddd :( Aw. I wish she wouldn't give up the baby for adoption. But I see why she would want to. Cant wait for more!
Holy shit. I am crying. I never cry. Like, ever. (and when i say ever, i really mean it, i don't cry...just not the crying type...)Damm, you must be a pretty good writer. Correction: you are a good writer. Keep updating :)
Holy shite. Your story is absolutely amazing. I'll be honest and say I bawled my eyes out. I STILL am. XD! Which is weird because I hate crying over fictional characters. Oh well. Ahh, your writing style is well written and very understandable. Although it makes my eyes burn due to crying, I love it. :]
Whoa, this story is so sad yet addicting to read. The wording is fantastic, and I must admit, I got a bit teary eyed. I cannot wait for the next update. Keep up the great work.
Wow. I'm actually really surprised this story hasn't gotten more comments. It's really good. Sad. Very teribly sad, but it's good. I was almost crying when he offically died. Well yeah, obviously I just foudn this story so I haven't read it all, but I can't wait to see what you do with it. I love it so far!
Kudos, your writing is well done and is actually coherent (some other stories I read on here are in English that is so butchered, it makes my eyes bleed). I think it'd be much easier to read if you seperated each person's dialogue, though.