I loved reading this. :) ...I kind of feel stalker to say this but I've read all of your Petericks. I love them! It's like watching them in my head! It feels all too real.
This one is going down as one of my favorite one-shots.
I loved reading this. :) ...I kind of feel stalker to say this but I've read all of your Petericks. I love them! It's like watching them in my head! It feels all too real.
This one is going down as one of my favorite one-shots.
Sorry this comment is unbearably late... Forgive and Forget?
As I can see from the above comments, I guess I did right in giving you first? :D
So, I totally love that Patrick the figment is so... Almost pushy, and willing to tell Pete what's what, but then when Pete meets the real Patrick, he's nervous and jittery, like the Patrick we all pretend to know and love. That, and I super love the idea that Pete created Patrick for his own (semi) dirty purposes. We all knew they were perfect for each other, but that Pete actually dreamed him up is the stuff of epic legend.
That, and the fact that Patrick made fun of Joe's mother made me lol. to the hizzle. Or some other gangster word that I'm too white to pull off.
lol I don't know if this is what you wanted from this comment, but you know, I live to please.
Oh, and I think that you should expand on this. It's really very original, and it'd be cool to read about how they got to where they are now. Especially since Pete knew it would happen.
Am I making sense? I think so... Oh, well. Know that I love it.
And that you should continue. You know, if ya wanna...
How can this have no comments, honestly? This is so adorably cute. At first I was kind of confused, but I do have my slow moments. Haha But, this was really good. Nice job