Blurred Vision - Comments

  • Buffy Summers

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    :brightside: I loved this so much. Every time I read Billie/Adie stories like this, I really want to strangle Billie Joe. He has this amazing wife and yet he can't stop fucking his best friend. He has this woman that would do anything for him and gave birth to two beautiful children, and he still screws his high school sweetheart? It makes me so mad. If I were Adrienne, I'd be filling out divorce papers. I wouldn't put up with his cheating and lying.

    :shifty But, all ranting aside, I loved the way you connected Adie's insecurities with blurred vision, and basically how you applied blurred vision to her seeing what her husband was doing clearly.

    All in all, best story.
    June 28th, 2009 at 05:06am
  • Graffiti

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    Billie Joe Armstrong:
    :tehe: You know I loved this dear...
    I think what makes it so cool and your own is the fact that you made Adie have bed vision. It was written well enough that I could picture it perfectly...
    And you totally feel for her, poor darling. :arms:
    :tehe: Bed vision.

    Lol thanks, love.
    June 3rd, 2009 at 09:02pm
  • Billie Joe Armstrong

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    :tehe: You know I loved this dear...
    I think what makes it so cool and your own is the fact that you made Adie have bed vision. It was written well enough that I could picture it perfectly...
    And you totally feel for her, poor darling. :arms:
    June 3rd, 2009 at 08:49pm
  • MeaganCool.

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    to put it frankly, that was fucking EPIC.
    everything about this drew me in.
    you have a very beautful way with words and if this story were a person, it could be a new member of greenday.
    i loved this more than anything. lol.
    June 2nd, 2009 at 11:52pm
  • catch 22

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    I liked that a lot. The whole thing with the glasses put a nice spin on it. :)
    June 2nd, 2009 at 10:23pm