June 28th, 2009 at 05:06am
:tehe: Bed vision.
- Billie Joe Armstrong:
- :tehe: You know I loved this dear...
I think what makes it so cool and your own is the fact that you made Adie have bed vision. It was written well enough that I could picture it perfectly...
And you totally feel for her, poor darling. :arms:
Lol thanks, love.
:shifty But, all ranting aside, I loved the way you connected Adie's insecurities with blurred vision, and basically how you applied blurred vision to her seeing what her husband was doing clearly.
All in all, best story.