okkayy....let me think....well first, have kitty introduce her to like bobby or kurt or rogue, and then like....humm...when the others get back, uhh have her show them what she can do....or something like that...and then i thik you should include something with her mother, like OH!!! how bouter some evilll person is after the mutants so they go after their families or something or other and then she has to go save her momma even though her momma hates her....yeah...thats all i got..
chapter 2 was really good!, cant wait to see whats next.
thanks, I'm glad you like it. Getting reveiws makes me so happy, and you're the first reviewer here on Mibba! You deserve a cookie! Chapter 3 should be out soon