The Day I Gave Up - Comments

That was sad. :/
it was very good though.

That was really good. I like how you didn't tell us everything.
It was sad, though.

wow that was really well written. you could see everything so clearly in front of you and the way you built it up - first telling us in the middle what's going on... really liked that one-shot.

Yeah, it was short, but in the shortness of it there was a lot of goodness. As I got to the end, tears were almost running down my face, but they didn't quite get out :XD
And I agree with above: it was intense, but good.

I thought it was very intense, but good.

that was really really goo, it was intense, but calm. i just stopped crying over this other thing and here i go again. it was great.<3