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  • rivals are insane

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    updateeeeeeeeeee this please please please with a cherry on top. i loves it oh and i be subscribing :D
    January 14th, 2010 at 06:06pm
  • Lady Control

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    Please update. Lol, I need to know how it ends.
    October 20th, 2009 at 07:40am
  • J. Third

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    Yay.
    They kissed!
    October 15th, 2009 at 12:42am
  • ismileforyou

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    This is fantastic! So thrilling :D
    October 10th, 2009 at 07:43pm
  • J. Third

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    EEP!
    Tension.
    August 28th, 2009 at 04:28am
  • J. Third

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    Oh no.
    I'll smack Brendon silly if he leaves her!

    *Xandria enters Torment*
    *Gets ready to hit Brendon*
    August 25th, 2009 at 10:50am
  • J. Third

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    EEP!
    What happens next?
    August 24th, 2009 at 11:59am
  • secrets-that-die

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    why is her dad sad?
    can't wait for more
    July 21st, 2009 at 02:29am
  • J. Third

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    Yep...i will cry!
    Why is the father sad?
    OMG!
    What are you going to do!?!
    July 18th, 2009 at 07:20am
  • J. Third

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    Well, I had to see it to believe it.
    AND by god, if you kill that baby...
    IMA CRY!!!
    July 1st, 2009 at 12:34pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    No, the baby can't die
    Woah, the doctor died
    June 30th, 2009 at 08:45am
  • brigitte.

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    loved killing jar <33

    love the sequel :]

    my only problem is that the layout makes the story really hard to read unless the reader highlights the text. sooooo...yeah.
    June 9th, 2009 at 02:18am
  • secrets-that-die

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    poor brendon his hand is prob hurts lol
    can't wait for more :]
    June 6th, 2009 at 05:38am
  • BeccaBoo21

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    yay i lovess the sequal. i feel bad 4 brendon cuz his hand is probaby starting to really hurt from the pain of ava squeezing it.
    June 5th, 2009 at 07:22am
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