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  • fayeislost

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    Awwww they saved her :)
    But why did they leave???????

    Loved it :D
    March 19th, 2009 at 06:01pm
  • Frank Lero

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    sorry my vampire (:
    awwhh cute.
    March 18th, 2009 at 08:25am
  • Bookworm_nai

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    The hidden message in the note was cute ^^
    I love this story.. <3
    March 18th, 2009 at 01:04am
  • fayeislost

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    Is she going to die, she can't die. :(
    She needs to be with Frankie.

    On the edge on my seat as always :D
    Love it
    March 17th, 2009 at 07:30pm
  • fayeislost

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    Is it Ray????????

    Yeah I think it's Ray.

    I love this :D
    March 16th, 2009 at 05:48pm
  • Rachelish

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    Ahh, you made me Lol when i read your author note.

    That was fucking great! 2 updates so soon, ily very much and much and much and heaps for ever and ever.

    You build suspense up magnificently, although in your excitement of writing, and trust me i can tell :) You leave out so much detail, now description isnt for everyone and if you cant read too much of it (like in LOTR books) then you won't write it, but there are so many places where you could further the story.

    Good job, love it, for ever :)
    March 16th, 2009 at 11:41am
  • Bookworm_nai

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    I like it so much :] I can't wait for the sequel.. did I spell that right? Sequal?
    March 16th, 2009 at 12:00am
  • fayeislost

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    New Reader!!!

    Woweeeeee I love this :)

    Why won't Frank save her???????
    But I think she should agree to this Eve or she'll die
    And that wouldn't be very good.

    Love it so far. can't wait for more :D
    March 15th, 2009 at 03:47pm
  • broken_city_sky

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    Those last few updates were awesome! Update again soon!
    March 15th, 2009 at 03:39am
  • Rachelish

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

    more more more, you have no idea how much your story gets me going!!! Im bouncing off the walls!!!
    March 15th, 2009 at 01:49am
  • kariajaderose

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    clif hanger much serisly! im dieng will they save her will she die! PLEASE UPDATE BEFORE I DIE OF MISSORY!!!!!!!
    March 14th, 2009 at 08:46pm
  • Bookworm_nai

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    More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more......... please?
    March 14th, 2009 at 06:17pm
  • Reinvent 12

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    :[
    You're way too good at cliffhangers!
    morreee soon...:]
    March 14th, 2009 at 06:14pm
  • Rachelish

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    Oh My Mibba God.

    That chapter sent chills through me as i was reading it!! I can tell you enjoyed writing it, im sure we will see a nother chapter very soon.

    EXCELLENTAY!
    March 14th, 2009 at 02:45am
  • Bookworm_nai

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    Eep! I had to comment one more time.. it's the 100th!!!!
    hehe.. You're story is amazing
    March 14th, 2009 at 12:26am
  • Bookworm_nai

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    Even more updates? Hehe.. yay..
    March 14th, 2009 at 12:25am
  • Reinvent 12

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    Ohhh! Nein she couldn't have left that locket there, it was the only thing protecting her!
    March 13th, 2009 at 11:22pm
  • Bookworm_nai

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    Hehe.. awesome. ^^
    March 13th, 2009 at 10:11pm
  • Rachelish

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    Me likey, me likey a lot, me likey a lot more if there was more xD
    March 13th, 2009 at 06:01am
  • Romanticide

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    Woah, Frank..is like two faced or something D:
    Why would he DO that!?
    ksjdfnjksdf...
    Amazing updates :]
    More soon please!
    February 25th, 2009 at 08:39pm
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