One Square Centimetre - Comments

that's amazing. Absolutely bloody amazing

especially because i'm queen of making something out of a moment like that and then getting let down because i was so fantastically wrong.

the ending lines are absolute killers

what a beautiful piece of work :)

You just leave me in total awe every time I read one of your stories. You are so very talented and I thoroughly look forward to and enjoy everything you write. Never stop.

I've been in this situation - and you are totally spot on! I just wish I could write as well as you.

Love ya chicken

This was really good. And I know you've gotten that in each of the reviews. But...I sincerely enjoyed it, masochistic creature that I am. Yes, I've been in that situation. Sadly. Except, I wouldn't have killed to be her. Weirdly enough, I'd have killed to have not been there. Or I'd have left as quickly as possible. If that makes sense.
I'm rambling.
It was amazing.

Wow. This was really well put together. It flowed, and it was right to the point. All of us have probably felt this way before, and you put it into a well written oneshot. I guess one of the reasons why I like this so much is because of those last lines. I know how it feels.

One square centimeter.

That’s all we ever were.

I would kill to be her.

Good job. You summed it all up in a simple story with three simple words - One Square Centimeter. =]

Beautifully written. I loved it.

Oh dear Borris another wonderful one-shot.
I loved how you protrayed something that happens so often.. the awkward hand graze..

I loved how the realisation set in... and the way you described the feeling of nervousness...

Overall this was an amazing one-shot and you my friend are an amazing writer :D

Its indescribable how I felt while reading this. It amazed me. It touched me.

This is amazingly well written.

I can't really speak for others but I am sure we've all had awkward moments like this before, and you managed to capture that awkward moment so well and put it into words.

It's actually triggered a lot of past incidents I have had which are similar and the way the made me feel. Exactly the same as how you described it.

And I really loved how you could catergorise all those emotions and feelings under three simple words; One Square Centimetre