I Try to Drown You out, so Down Goes Another One - Comments

I'm guessing... more drama in the future? Perhaps a lot of it?

I can't wait!

Well, rawr. She's gunna be gone for a long time.

warped fucking tour!
awesome, nicely written, he, eli and marley sitting in a tree
going to sequeal now
loved this story

:) So i know i'm kinda late commenting about her getting back with Eli but whatever. lol. Even though i was totally Team Jonah... i really love Marley and Eli together. :) Warped tour! YESSS! haha. can't wait for the next one. yay!

WARPED?! WARPED?!
ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?! I'll stop using caps now...Are you serious? I already subscribed and I can't wait.

Thanks for missing your bus for us :D
I, for one appreciate it :)
Not to mention that I completely love your story :)

Yeah, I'm really sure about Eli. Hopefully he doesn't get too mad and want to break up with her again and then regret it. Well I can't wait for the first chapter to come out. Please hurry!

uh oh.... is his jealously gonna get in the way again?

eliiiiiii doesn't react well to marley leaving. crapola. :(
haha.

Um, hi. I'm a new reader as you may already be able to tell. I just read the last two stories in about 2 days. I fell in love with Eli then Jonah but still had a strong feeling about Eli even though he was kind of mean to Marley. Well I love your writing, it is abosolutely amazing. You are very talented.

Let me just say this: FUCKING AW!

I agree w/ 'chasingmemories' eli's my 2nd choice, it's your decision as to where these stories go.... dudeskii i'm happy you're continuing on w/ the story!!! i gives love cuz comments = love and love = updates >.< haha pzo chica!

Aw, her and Eli are back together again! Its okay. Eli was my second choice anyways. Yay! The threequel is up for subscribing. Update super soon.

i love the ending!!!!

YES!!

TEAM ELI FTW!!!

woot!

YES!!

TEAM ELI FTW!!!

woot!

Wait wait wait.
Hold up.
ELI ?!
Pfftt.
I gave up being 'Switzerland' for nothing.
It's all good though,
I think Marley and Eli being together would fit the plot better, too.
xDD

I'm glad you chose what you thought was best. :) Cant wait for the next one!

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

HOLY SHIT. yay. it was so peaceful and cute. nobody's mad although jonah's still probably a little hurt. and eli, that was perfect. I can visualize it perfectly. aaawh. :D

OH MY GOD!!!!
Eli just comes out of nowhere on a tractor and tells her to shut the fuck up...

I loved it. I would love it even more if i didn't have to read it using the internet connection on my Wii. Stupid boyfriend, making me fall while skating and giving me a sprained ankle.