A darker wing, - Comments

  • I saw you'd posted after me on Rate The Story Game, and I was so entralled by what I read I just had to come and read something of yours.

    Your description is amazing; for such a short piece you managed to portray so much. I love this idea of a fallen angel, something previously perfect but ruined by something.

    You're a very talented author - there was a few spelling and grammar mistakes in there but apart from that it was a beautiful, well written piece. Well done. In Love
    June 13th, 2009 at 09:58pm