Heart-Shaped Kiss - Comments

  • useyourtelescope

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    So I love Something Corporate. And I love Nick Santino. And I love this story. Adorable. <3
    August 10th, 2012 at 08:20am
  • Bambie!

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    I was cooing at this story the whole time! It's sooo cute! I love it!

    Thanks for entering!
    August 7th, 2010 at 12:16am
  • afraidofeverest

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    i will get down on my internet knees and begbegBEG you to make this a story.
    June 11th, 2009 at 01:24am
  • raindrops_on_roses

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    You are an amazing writer!!!!!!!!!

    I quite like something Corporate...
    June 10th, 2009 at 10:27am
  • andiegube

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    By golly that was amazing (:
    And yes, I typed out golly. aha. -dork moment-
    Anyway, that impeccable. Your writing is truly wonderful. You get immersed into the story line and end up been super happy when you finish reading ;D
    Like Tania, I wanted to slap Tina for dumping Nick. Who in the world would dump Nick Sexy Ginger Santino? Yeah, like no one. Dumb girl. aha.
    But I'm glad now that he made a connection with Kara. It was so cute the way the met and how their stories intertwined.
    You indeed do just to this song. Lovely, just lovely.
    <33 (:
    June 9th, 2009 at 12:49am
  • Spencer_Reid

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    awee, this was really cute. i loved the simplicity of it. awesome job =]
    June 7th, 2009 at 07:53pm
  • piecesofmydreams

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    Oh my god. If there was any reason to cry this story would be one. Right now I'm typing this with tears in my eyes at how beautifully written this story is.

    The story line makes my heart ache and smile at the same time and it's so confusingly amazing and-gah! Just incredible. With absolutely no exaggeration.
    June 7th, 2009 at 01:16pm
  • allison wonderland

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    Well, Tania said a lot that I was going to say myself!!!!!
    So I am sorry you will have to endure reading it again ;]

    Okay, so, first of all, Nick Santino is my secret lover [only when Tania is with John xD] so naturally, I LOVE that you wrote about him.
    Secondly, I love how the story flowed with the song. It was just like whoa!!!
    It feels so sad that she cheated on Nick like that, I was just like no freaking way, go die! Haha. And how no one remembered her birthday? That's awful and I bet on Monday, half of my friends will have forgotten that it is mine. So I relate.

    I absolutely love the way that they met too :]
    And everything about it I adored!
    June 7th, 2009 at 07:46am
  • Lonewolf

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    Oh my holy shiznit!
    No you didn't!
    But YES you did!
    You wrote about Nick!!!! EEEP! :cute:
    Ahhhhhh, I totally loved it! Words can't describe!
    Now for sure I'll get a shout out from him for you :hug:
    I was like I can't believe she did that, it's brilliant.
    And wow, your writing has like grown so much, it is amazing.
    I loved the way you interpeted the song into it.
    And when she broke Nick's heart I wanted to slap that bitch. :grmml:
    But the whole chemistry between Kara and was amazing.
    Okay so you wrote like the best line ever -"The sky began to sob again"
    I freaking loved it, I have no idea why, but I loved it. It's pure genious.
    You did an amzing job Honeybee :mrgreen:
    I love you, and I love this, but not as much as I love you.
    xoxo

    p.s.- :twitch: < that is the funniest smiley I have ever seen. I was about to cry from laughing so hard, hahahaha.
    June 7th, 2009 at 07:17am