June 28th, 2009 at 12:03pm
First of all, thank you for entering this in my contest :cute:
It was very cute and bubbly, full of small awkward moments.
The characters were quite simple, though well-defined, and I like how Julia became more comfortable with Zach as the 'date' progressed, and he followed her lead.
I think that the characters would have been a little more believable if they were perhaps fourteen instead of sixteen, but then again maybe that's just me.
I loved how at the end he'd had the wrong date for the show all along :tehe:
I don't know what to say, it's great.
I love how he's so nervous and fucks up all the time, and she doesn't even care about that.