Honestly, I've Never Really Been Honest With Myself. - Comments

only you could take my love for the sexiest man alive && turn it into a beautifully written one-shot.
only you could take a story line like this && turn it into something totally different from all the others.
only you could have me hooked on all your writing, like i've never been hooked before.
lets face it, i'm an addict, && after one day of reading your work, your writing is my drug.

That was beautiful (:
I liked it

This is absolutely AWESOME!
:D

Lovelovelove it.

This was really amazing.
I'm so happy you were one of the winners!
This really deserved it.

Off-note: this girl must be hella short if she is 4 inches shorter than Oli..yea.

this is amazing.
it takes a lot to make a really good one-shot.

this is REALLY good. :D

love it!
nice writing! ;]

That was just brilliant.

So this is really good. Like.. really good. :D
I really liked how it's not necissarily a "happy ending," even though both of the main characters got what they wanted in the end. But that's probably just because I'm bitter towards happy endings. >.>
But in all seriousness, this is really well-written, and I could totally relate with Aubrey. (:

Um, yeah this is basically AMAZING.
I don't know what other word to use since amazing basically describes your writing in general. Quick pace, straightforward, edgy, good all over all.
The details in this were simple, but it was just enough information to paint a picture in my head.
It was nice reading about Oli since I haven't read one about him before on this site. Digging the way you made his character. Though he was mean and cocky to Aubrey, I think it was cute the way he just grabbed her face and kissed her. Even if their relationship's twisted. Good kind of twisted though if that makes sense. aha.
This was lovely and worked with the song so well. Fantastic job, girlie ;]
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Cool I don't wanna write my one-shot now.
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That was cute, in the most dysfunctional way.
I think my favorite part was when he was telling her how he tried to get the chick he was fooling around to follow Aubrey into the kitchen with her.
Despite the bitch move that was, to torment her, there was something endearing about him that almost made you feel bad for him.
Basically, this was adorable and cute and ridiculous, and I liked how realistic it was.
Once again your writing astounds me, Kaylie. Great job <3

This was really good!
I love the way the story fit in with the song.
[I listen to the song you picked while reading]
It just fit really well.
Also, I love the refreshing taste of Oli Sykes.
I don't normally read about him, and I like that you entered with him.
:]

Good job!

Brilliant! I loved it!