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  • BMSmith

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    I know this is an old story, but I love it so far. I can't stop reading it.
    July 29th, 2013 at 01:49am
  • Run.Away

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    :)
    November 9th, 2012 at 02:37pm
  • in love we raise.

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    I screamed.
    I screamed at the top of my lungs and threw my iPod at my wall when she broke up with him.
    I absolutely adore this story. One of the best I have ever read.
    November 17th, 2010 at 05:56am
  • danceislife

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    ahhh! I want the sequel! (I've been MIA for months...)
    November 14th, 2010 at 07:39am
  • love only knows

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    Okay, I totally didn't get this notification!! D:
    I haven't read my comments either because I haven't been on my computer
    But I can't believe I took this long to read the last chapter!

    AND I CAN'Y BELIEVE YOU TORE THEM APART :O
    I know it was bound to happen, I mean, there has to be material for the sequel.
    But ahh D:
    Kyle and Avery are perfect, yet poor Avery is all like, insecure...
    *sigh* this just makes me more anxious to see where you take the story to in the sequel!

    Amazing story. It always is! And it is still my favorite story to see an update for.
    Keep me posted on the sequel :) <3
    November 6th, 2010 at 09:12am
  • Just.A.Cupcake.Lover

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    SEQUEEELLLLLLLLLL!!! please do the sequel, i would absolutley love that! i was very sad to see that she ended it. I can't wait to see what happens!
    :D
    November 5th, 2010 at 03:33am
  • Dezi Demize

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    Chapter 38: I know this is going to sound harsh, but Avery is a bitch! I mean she didn't even have the guts to try to make things work with Kyle! She broke that sweet guy's heart and I hope she feels awful and gulity for what she did!!!!
    Post the sequal soon<3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
    November 4th, 2010 at 06:21am
  • BeforeMeetsAfter

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    OMG THANK GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u tolly had me worried there for a moment girlie like holy crap heart beating rapidly and everything but yay i cant wait for a sequal because they are without a doubt my favorite mibba couple!! so please hurry because i dont think i can wait much longer ahhhhhh sooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooddddd
    November 3rd, 2010 at 01:34am
  • zima.

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    i seriously can't wait for the sequel :)
    November 2nd, 2010 at 03:45pm
  • Run.Away

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    wow, I actually really like the ending, even though it means a wait, It'll be worth it :)
    November 2nd, 2010 at 12:43pm
  • a quarter and a kiss

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    NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONONONONONONONOOOOOO.
    nbd.
    I was met with an empty sidewalk and Kyle Burns' heart in pieces on the pavement in front of me.
    Can I just reiterate how amazingly you ended it? You're golden. Can't wait for the sequel. :D
    November 2nd, 2010 at 01:10am
  • bealiveplaydead

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    I was met with an empty sidewalk and Kyle Burns' heart in pieces on the pavement in front of me.

    That line was amazing and a great way to end the chapter. Lol I LOVE how you kept using the title. Haha I know I should be upset about how this ended but I think its awesome and I CANT WAIT for the sequel
    :D
    November 1st, 2010 at 10:41pm
  • toriluvsyoumwah

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    I love this story! And I love the ending..completely unexpected. Can't wait for the sequel! :)
    November 1st, 2010 at 12:44pm
  • Burn Out Brighter

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    GRRRRRRR. just grrrr.
    but it was written so well...
    November 1st, 2010 at 11:15am
  • Chemical.Kid.

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    KEEN FOR THE SEQUEL! asdfghjk YAY! But cliffhanger much?
    November 1st, 2010 at 10:58am
  • a quarter and a kiss

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    I LOVE YOU.
    Okay, now that that's been said, here's my take:
    When I saw the story title in the chapter, I started freaking out. In a good way. It's just that that never really happens anymore, seeing the title in the text and whatnot. Besides that...
    I can't stand the thought of her breaking up with him, or even lying to him to keep the relationship going. Though, if it does happen, I'm guessing (and hoping) there'll be a sequel. If there isn't, get ready for the second time I've been overwhelmingly irked because ~someone ended a story on a bad note. I live for the cute stuff and happy endings and the build-up of the relationship. This has all of that. I just hope that wherever it ends, whether it be in this story or another, it's a happy ending.
    That being said, I think the other 150 people who read this should just jump off a curb, one preferably three feet from the ground. They need to bow down to you via binary code.
    October 31st, 2010 at 02:52am
  • Chemical.Kid.

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    asdfghjkl SHE CAN NOT DUMP KYLE! NO! :'(
    October 30th, 2010 at 03:14pm
  • bealiveplaydead

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    WWWHHHYYYY???
    WHY??
    :(
    Avery doent have to end it! It broke my heart just thinking of it!!
    Lol

    Great chapter and kudos on using the title in it haha
    ...even though it did make me sad...
    October 29th, 2010 at 11:52pm
  • love only knows

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    OHMYGOODNESS. WHYWHYWHY?
    Why are you doing this to me? Just... why?!
    Avery--girl, you need to stop pushing people away.
    Poor, poor Kyle... :(
    He won't know what hit him, aaahhh...

    And shit has officially hit the fan.
    Next chapter will be the aftermath of that mess.
    Update soon!
    I can't wait to see what's to come in the sequel!
    October 29th, 2010 at 06:22am
  • kissmedissme437

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    Aw, why must she dump him? I think it's best for them to stay together, but that may just be me... PLEASE MAKE HER LOVE HIM!!!!
    October 29th, 2010 at 05:25am