I screamed. I screamed at the top of my lungs and threw my iPod at my wall when she broke up with him. I absolutely adore this story. One of the best I have ever read.
Okay, I totally didn't get this notification!! D: I haven't read my comments either because I haven't been on my computer But I can't believe I took this long to read the last chapter!
AND I CAN'Y BELIEVE YOU TORE THEM APART :O I know it was bound to happen, I mean, there has to be material for the sequel. But ahh D: Kyle and Avery are perfect, yet poor Avery is all like, insecure... *sigh* this just makes me more anxious to see where you take the story to in the sequel!
Amazing story. It always is! And it is still my favorite story to see an update for. Keep me posted on the sequel :) <3
Chapter 38: I know this is going to sound harsh, but Avery is a bitch! I mean she didn't even have the guts to try to make things work with Kyle! She broke that sweet guy's heart and I hope she feels awful and gulity for what she did!!!! Post the sequal soon<3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
OMG THANK GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u tolly had me worried there for a moment girlie like holy crap heart beating rapidly and everything but yay i cant wait for a sequal because they are without a doubt my favorite mibba couple!! so please hurry because i dont think i can wait much longer ahhhhhh sooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooddddd
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONONONONONONONOOOOOO. nbd. I was met with an empty sidewalk and Kyle Burns' heart in pieces on the pavement in front of me. Can I just reiterate how amazingly you ended it? You're golden. Can't wait for the sequel. :D
I was met with an empty sidewalk and Kyle Burns' heart in pieces on the pavement in front of me.
That line was amazing and a great way to end the chapter. Lol I LOVE how you kept using the title. Haha I know I should be upset about how this ended but I think its awesome and I CANT WAIT for the sequel :D
I LOVE YOU. Okay, now that that's been said, here's my take: When I saw the story title in the chapter, I started freaking out. In a good way. It's just that that never really happens anymore, seeing the title in the text and whatnot. Besides that... I can't stand the thought of her breaking up with him, or even lying to him to keep the relationship going. Though, if it does happen, I'm guessing (and hoping) there'll be a sequel. If there isn't, get ready for the second time I've been overwhelmingly irked because ~someone ended a story on a bad note. I live for the cute stuff and happy endings and the build-up of the relationship. This has all of that. I just hope that wherever it ends, whether it be in this story or another, it's a happy ending. That being said, I think the other 150 people who read this should just jump off a curb, one preferably three feet from the ground. They need to bow down to you via binary code.
OHMYGOODNESS. WHYWHYWHY? Why are you doing this to me? Just... why?! Avery--girl, you need to stop pushing people away. Poor, poor Kyle... :( He won't know what hit him, aaahhh...
And shit has officially hit the fan. Next chapter will be the aftermath of that mess. Update soon! I can't wait to see what's to come in the sequel!