Before It's Over - Comments

Oh my gosh! I was first to cmmt on the updated chapter :)
And I got a new page!
YESSSS
xD

Amazing Story :D

I liked that ending MUCCCHHHH better
:D

HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT!!!!!!! haha ur rite u royally pissed me off for leaving it there but dont worry i forgive you because its such a good story haha and nooooooooooooooo i cannot beeeee there has to be more than 2 chapters leftttttttttt

Aw. Kyles so cute, but Avery is bein silly again!!

HE LOVES HER. HE REALLY, REALLY LOVES HER.
I hate you now. Stupid cliffhanger. Gahh, kidding broski. I could never hate you. You wrote this entire story. So, in that case... I LOVE YOU.
Cliffhanger? Nahh.

update update update update pretty pleaseeeeee

I read this a while ago on my iPod, and I hate commenting on my iPod, so i waited until i got to my computer.
And now I'm on my computer, and I reread the chapter,
and i literally just went "aww" :)
They are so cute together!
Next chapter is will "make things a bit more exciting" ?
Thats code for "shits about to hit the fan", right?

Haha, well regardless, great update :)

*sigh* awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was soooo cute and yay about the sequel!!! i love kyle.......but i agree with av the whole nickname thing sorta sketchy

Loved the new update :)

I am pleased with the new, very cute update. I swear, you write these couple-y moments very well. You make me jealous, my friend. :)

Heyy, long time no see! :)
Oh my god, I couldn't help it, but I aww'd. Outloud.
They're just so cuuuuuute. :D
Update soon?

holy crap haha
so...this might not make much sense...
but i spent a while in Costa Rica with my brother (i'm from Chicago) and i was really bored one night so i started reading this. and i instantly fell in love with it.
actually my brother would make fun of me because for like 2 days straight i'd sit outside (in like 100+ degree weather) reading your story, i was that much in love with it.

but then i came home,and i didn't realize you updated until now...and then i saw that you put a link to my story. (thanks for that by the way)

so..i guess i'm just writing to say that this is freaking awesome. and you're a great writer. and i'm sorry if i bored you with my little rant haha

Oh, boy :)
Thankyou for the great update!
I really, honestly, LOVE reading this story.

Kyle was such a sweetie!
The coffee shop seems like a perfect place to have their date!
And the song? Another mystery?
My, there are many layers to Avery, isn't there?

I am sad to hear that this is coming to an end :/
But you've had a long run with this story.
A long, amazing, fantastic, run.
I would love a sequel, but at the same time,
I wouldn't mind if Avery and Kyle were one with this story.
I guess i'll just have to see what you come up with :)

This story is so cute :)
Haha

I swear on my Mibba account that I was just about to comment your whether you were going to update soon when I decided to check my email first. Lo and behold, there was "Before It's Over" waiting for me to click its link.
I'll be honest, I'm not quite into sequels as much as most people. I like the chase of the story, the bulid-up of the relationship. That's probably why I love this story so much because it was a chase of more than thirty chapters to get to where we are now. Granted, I probably will subscribe to the sequel, but if I honestly don't like it (FAT CHANCE), then I'll tell you.
But, anyway, I just let out a loud WHOOP when I saw it was updated. Happy as can be, and the quintessential first date was enough to make me awww inside... and verbally, too. So sad it's coming to a close... But I smell a tiny bit of petty drama in the works. :)

I literally cheered outloud when I saw that you had updated.
No joke.
Awww, Kyle's so cute. :3
OH? AVERY DRAMA? :DDD
Awsome, as always.

SO glad their date went good! I love it so far, they're cute. I wonder what the song was. It was really good. Update soon(:

i love love loved the brother sister thing that was a great thing to put in!!! i wonder what he and kyle talked about i guess i will just have to wait and see

i just read all of this. it is amazinggg! please update soon :D !

Ooh. <33 Lunch datee. I can see why everyone likes Kyle. <33

He's adorable! I love the story and please update soon. :D