Thanks for all the schweet comments, guys! I love getting feedback on my stories, and this one in particular... I'm sort of pouring my heart out into it. So thank you for taking the time!
Wooh! First real comment (not that your wasn't) It's really great...you're a good writer and I think you just need to keep updating and people will start to notice it more...then boom you'll be over-loaded with comments and subscribers.
Which I'm about to do (subscribe that is). :) keep up the good work
I'm bummed that this has gotten no comments yet... I actually like this one a lot. I mean, sure, it's a cliched plot, but I thought I was doing fairly well with it, all things considered... And it's Ray-centric!