Qu'est-ce que ton sentiment? - Comments

And again...

Seems when I'm unsure I stumble upon this...Still a bit teary from the first time.

I wish stuff like this happened for real...

Le c'est stupéfiant,

I liked it, it spoke. Regardless of the lack of dialog, it spoke.

Imagery was off the wall spectacular. Who ever this is for is lucky yo have such a writer trailing after them.

-Jakki[[the green hair'd bass playing monster]]

I find myself reading this yet again...

I read this and it makes me think...we've come along way....

Ahhh wonderful! I have been looking for a story/author on here like you.
I cannot get over this paragraph:

"They held that kind of sadness, the kind you find only a funerals and in hospital rooms. The kind in crosses on the side of the road, and across the seas where grown men play the pawns in a twisted game of chess."

Or this one:

"They held that kind of sadness, the kind you find only a funerals and in hospital rooms. The kind in crosses on the side of the road, and across the seas where grown men play the pawns in a twisted game of chess."

I love writers when they can identify those small key pieces that trigger so much emotion and use it as a metaphor or something else. Am-a-a-a-azing!

This was incredibly amazing. I loved the way it was written, and the french dialogue added so well to it. I loved it.

Honestly...it made me tear up a lil bit.

Been sitting here trying to think of something to say and I just don't have those kind of words to give.

-Ta Star

Pie- unless it's not about me then I feel dumb............................