OMG OMG no way I'm the first one to comment!!!!:D Lol. *Clears throat*. Well the story has some very interesting description.XD And the main character was describe very well. And I can't wait to see where the story takes me. The plot is very very interesting. Thanks James for telling me about your guys story I'm glad I subscribed!^^ Well like I said I can't wait to see where the story goes and what happens next!!:D