Wow, this was really touching. Zacky was so sweet and sensiive. At one point I thought she was going to die and leave him behind, but she didn't and that made me happy. It was amazing and wonderful and just the right amount of sad! Loved it!
“Do you want a cookie?” Jimmy asked taking out the box and all but shoving the cookie into her mouth.
That was cute. haha. I love the way you portray Jimmy in your stories... you make me love him. haha.
But yes.. this one shot was wonderful, my dear. I think you did an awesome job with it =) I love how you told the story and how it went along smoothly during his recovery and then release and things weren't just all peachy between him and Jess. It made it more realistic =)
I was afraid that she would die for a second there, but I'm with Gelica, I'm glad she didn't =)
Again, wonderful job! I look forward to more one shots from you in the future =)