Why Won't You Fall Into My Arms? - Comments

I finally finished the chapters XD My mom kept distracting me -__-
and I told you this already, but it's awesome. I absolutely adore the idea of it and how it's written and how characters are.
but
I do want to know where everyone disappeared too.

What an amazing story!
Can't wait till Jack wakes up!
x

Yay! I'm the first one on this page. WOOWHOO! (:

Yeah, my banner. (:

I think that Jack and her (which I forgot her name again Gah!) should wake wrapped in each others arms. That would be awesome. Though she'd probably freak out, when really she totally loved it. Ha ha. (:

Theres ,my banner!

Love the update
That scene where she attacked him was great
well so was the rest of the chapter
LOve this story so much
More soon?

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH she wanted 2 rape Jack lol no but seriously loved the ch =))))))

this is an awsome story

Gahhh stilll loving it!!

I absolutley love the way you write; it's beautiful
They have such great chemisty
More soon?

This is just all kinds of amazing.

Haha I really like this.
And the best idea I have for explaining their whole situation is....nothing. Like not nothing but like...you should just not explain it. And let the readers imagine up their own personal explaination for why Jack & Sophie are the only two people on earth, you know?
Okay maybe you don't know, but whatever, update soon (:

I can make you a banner but it wont be amazing and I'll need pictures of what you think they look like. Love the story btw

cant wait til the next ch. =)))))))))))) n OMG who woul have guess they were frends be4 wow or maybe ppl woul have guess n im jus 2 dumb lol

Oh wow. For a little bit I forgot what story I was reading, and I was confused. Then I remembered after a minute and it made everything make sense. Haha. (:

I will make you a totally awesome banner. It will take me a little bit though. (:

oooohhh... DRAMA :O

OHHHHHHHHHH =(( poor Jack =(( anywhooooooooo can't wait 4 the next ch. =)))

This is really good. Please update soon :]

love this story
more soon?

I loved the little moment that they had.
It was sweet.
I can tell I am going to like this story.
:)
I can't wait for the next update!

Not bad, actually. I've read a few stories with this general idea, but I've always rather enjoyed the different reasons, points of view and the tones of humanity in desparation.

A few pointers here and there - You're moving the story a bit too quickly. Try slowing it down a bit, adding a little more description here and there, using metaphors and colours, things that will lengthen the paragraphs.

The main character, I don't mind her that much, but personally I thought you should have gone with a different path with her. Instead of making her in the center of the "in crowd" or whatever in bloody hell it's called, making her a little more of the student who's just average, who's invited to parties but doesn't really go that often, the kind of character that might not be extremely "beautiful" but is still pretty. That would have definitely added and original ting to the story, especially with the addition of the cocky popular boy.

But it is your story, so I'll leave you to decide your own characterization.

It has potential. Bonne chance :]]