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  • schoolisforchumps

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    Oh drama! Hahah I'm really curious as to what actually happened between the two of them. Your a great writer! Can't wait for the next update!
    March 12th, 2011 at 04:52am
  • TechniColorScream

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    Wow. you're back...again. I always liked this story and now that the plot is starting to thicken somewhat it is becoming a favourite and I am wanting more. so please, for my selfishness, update soon.

    Much love
    TCS
    March 6th, 2011 at 05:31am
  • TayVengeance

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    Haha, don't mind me for JUST opening my email and finding this update... It was nice. :) intense, even. The mother and daughter remind me sliiiiightly of yourself... :p it's very nice, love.

    ^ and I just have to say your signature made me laugh... I get it! :)
    January 11th, 2011 at 11:23pm
  • Groupie Puff Pants

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    Oh my god, thank you!
    This is definitely the best chapter yet, merry christmas!
    December 25th, 2010 at 12:22pm
  • Groupie Puff Pants

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    I totally forgot Mibba even existed until you started writing again!
    This is such amazing story!
    December 24th, 2010 at 10:05am
  • Kmart.

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    Yeah, well, that chapter's been sitting in a word doc for months waiting to be perfected so, yeah. :) Besides, I was inspired yesterday. :)
    December 18th, 2010 at 02:22am
  • TayVengeance

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    You updated. :)
    December 17th, 2010 at 08:16pm
  • pretty ood

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    love this.
    *subsribes*

    update and i'll give you some form of sugary, rainbow lollies.
    October 19th, 2009 at 01:03pm
  • TayVengeance

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    Poor frank! D:

    You updated!! iloveyou!!!
    October 17th, 2009 at 12:43am
  • northernlights;

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    Awww I'm Gonna Miss You.
    Have Fun(:
    July 21st, 2009 at 02:53am
  • northernlights;

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    Fuck yeah!
    I've been waiting forever for you to update(:
    I fucking love it!
    July 19th, 2009 at 02:58am
  • breathe for love.

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    awesome!
    July 6th, 2009 at 06:19am
  • TayVengeance

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    :3 iloveyou!!! :D it's still amazing. Lawl.
    July 4th, 2009 at 01:39pm
  • TechniColorScream

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    this is very...interesting. i like it. i think i would understand it more if a) i wasn't tired and b) i was american,

    love and bugs
    JessimickaH
    June 10th, 2009 at 01:44pm
  • Fistmeetwall.

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    I like this.
    You're a good writer! x]
    June 10th, 2009 at 12:53am
  • Chemically Romantic

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    Well I'm sort of assuming this is a Frerard, but it doesn't really say..? Correct me if I'm wrong. I'm still going to subscribe, obviously. I love your writing. :D

    The only thing is, there were a couple mistakes, and quite a few parts where you switched from third person to first person.. it was a little confusing. Like here:
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    He nods and darts off towards his stuff. As my things come into sight, I notice my blanket is no longer balled up on the ground, but folded in a perfect square, and my bag is resting neatly on top of it. I smile, thanking Rat in my head. He sits for a moment, resting his legs.
    :shifty I hate giving constructive criticisms because I always just feel like I'm being mean.. :lol:

    Other than that, this is really good so far. I'm excited. :mrgreen:
    June 9th, 2009 at 10:29pm
  • northernlights;

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    Wow.
    Your a great writer(:
    I love ur stories, and this one is so exception(:
    Hope you update soon.
    *subscribes*
    June 9th, 2009 at 09:48pm
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