I Don't Belong Here, but It Feels So Right - Comments

I love the story I hope you van update soon.

Hi! I'm here from comment swap :)

First off, I should tell you that your first chapter, the one titled "Information", is breaking Mibba's story rules. I'd hate to see your story get deleted! But anywho, I read the first few chapters and I have to say that I kinda like it so far. I'm not fond of Twilight, but that didn't seem to be a problem. Your dialogue is great, it flows very easily and naturally, which is great. I'd just like to point out that there should be commas after sentences that would end in a period. Other than that, great job and I wish you lots of luck with your story :)

r u going to update soon? :D

I'm seriously enjoying this story please continue this story please....I think tht Rosalie is territorial for no reason I mean she is starting to be a bitch and it's driving Emmett insane tht it's making him unhappy and if Megan makes him happy thn let him be happy with her, no need to kill Megan becuz ur jealous tht ur husband found his real soul mate which isn't u and besides I'm sure tht Alice, Edward, Emmett and Jasper will find a way to stop u from hurting or killin Megan, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it!!!! U have to upload soon

i absolutely love it please update again soon!!

I like this story, update soon!

Updateeeeee!!!!! I cant wait to know what happens next!! Updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

update again soon please.

~Comment Swap

well this is a pretty good start,
You have a good writing style, but there were a few parts that seemed a little repetitive but I'm sure if you scanned over it again you'd see that.
So far the characters are good.
I'm not much of a Twilight fan but this is a good start to your story well done and keep writing :D
Cheers Esther

Okay I have to admit, Comment Swap brought me here.

Before I continue with my comment I have to take a moment and admit that I am not a fan of book spin-offs so this is something that i would not typically read.

Now, with that in mind, the prologue, now that you have the characters up, I would, if I were you, delete that chapter as it is not particularly useful and some people may even find it annoying :)

However, you have a very good writing style and I really enjoyed reading the story, even though it is not something I would go searching for.

Keep it up :)

I used to be a bigger twilight fan then I am now. Now i kind of just watch the movies because I've read all the books and seen the rest of the movies. I've never been an Emmett fan though. This story has great potential though. Your writing skill is strong, and I think that helps a lot.

i love this story, please continue updating :)

great job

Great chapter.

I like it good job :)

Great chapter.

Oh my gosh, I LOVE this story! Please update soon!!! =) <3 <3 <3

I'm excited to read more!!!!!!!!!

update soon please, i love this