haha...great chapter. i actually know a girl like that at school. not to be mean or anything, but it's a known fact i think she changed schools because everyone hated her
Oh lawd. That was a suberb chapter and I can not wait for Billie's next move. God dam, His plan is as you said, intricate and that's what makes it delighful. Muahahaaa.
I apologize for my lack of comment-writing recently... I haven't had much time to check up on my subscriptions. =O So I'll try to make this comment extra-special. xD
First off, I love this story. You are such an incredible writer, it's a little hard for me to fathom it. Even though the story line is a little cliche, it's fantastic and somehow fresh when it's written by you. Congrats!
Secondly, I think its fantastic how she just up and dumped Billie for Tre because he was in a band (or, as I presumed, since she really only took notice of Billie Joe when he said that he was in a band). I personally don't see what Billie (or Tre, for that matter) in Grace, she seems like too much of a bitch to hang around for my tastes, but its definitely your story.
Lastly, I can't wait for another update. I loved how Billie made a little list of all the phases of his plan. I want to know what Mike's reaction is, I want to know how Tre and Grace act the next day in school, I want to read more.
Horsie: It's a combination of both really. Tre's mean. AND Billie's pretty insane. But I usually love Tre, so I don't really know why I'm making him so evil. Hey, it makes a nice story though.