Deathly Kisses... - Comments

I don't see anything wrong with your layout or grammer. Maybe someone's just jealous of your writing talents ;) We shall never know. Don't know if I've commented before but I've been following your story for agggggges, and I really like it :) Keep up the good work x

O.O GAWD NOOO! NOT THERE! DONT!!! AGH!!!

Wow.
So many twists(:

your layout is fine, its actually better than a lot i know...and I love that you put pics of everyone on the summary page.
Everything is just getting more and more suspenseful...I love it!

ok whoever the heck is reporting you needs to stop...your layout is perfectly readable for pete's sake! and great chapter. love the suspense :)

loved the update. i dont know why anyone reported you. your spelling/grammar is fine! the only thing i noticed was the banner at the top says "dealty" instead of "deathly" other than that i rarely ever see any mistakes. you're right...leave the editing to the editors

Wow.

Wow... I thought he didn't want to lose.
Ahhh, Is he going to kill her now?

Wow, I really missed alot while I was gone. I mean Tabanca is hitting on nikole and her fight with Skyler was interesting. I wondered if he really going to let Nikole cancel their engagement.
great story and I can't wait to see what happens next.

oh no! what's going to happen? gah! i dont know how to feel about this one!

ugh! She's so evil.

ooooooooooooh snap! love this chapter, well i love all the chapters. update soon?

ANother amazing chapter
Can't wait to see what happens there
Tabanca's pick was beautiful
More soon?

Darn why did you have to leave it on a cliffhanger. Tabanca is next on my potato hitlist. Great update, update soon.

awww ur thinking about sequels????? its gona end??? soon??? nooo!

uh oh...more conflict!!

Loved the updates
Love the family being back in the picture
More soon?

yeah i tottaly agree to x.Mercy
i hope that she gets her memory back cause it's akward being so out:D
update as soon as you can and i hope things will get better and better for you!
LoVe!!!:)

i think we should comment wether we get shout outs or not. ^_^
i love how shes back at home, finally!
but i bet stanely is going to like totally ruin it yes? yes? lol.

anyways. i hope damien does something too.
but somewhere works. =)

i love the series. i really do. i hope everything works out for you so the updates can come out fast (and with shout outs?) lol.

That sad that Stanley like that. Who know what he went through. At least she get to see her family, but she might learns a few new things there.
Great updates...