Hey! This is a really good start I like your writing :XD Gerard seems like a really sweet character and it must be hard to be crushing on someone for like three years. I feel bad for him but at least he isn't moping about it.
Personally, I would have loved Frank to be a little more realistic/ mature because it might add a little more depth to his character, but either way I really enjoyed this and I look forward to more.
Why wont you ever update again?
I really like this, It's really funny!
-subscribes just in case-
Won't be updated ever again. No matter how much you want it.
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Even if I really realllyyy want it? :(