Black Permanent Marker - Comments

WOWIE NICEEEE A+

I loved this, and usually I don't read this type of stuff. But it was great.
The marker bit was perfect. I loved it. :)

I really enjoyed reading this!
The black permanent marker was a very creative and cute element to your story.
In my opinion, you described Alex quite well, I can totally imagine Alex writing a message like that on someone's body.I can't really see him make those vulgar remarks but I'm just a fan.
And how would anyone know really xD
Really good job!

This blew me away. c:
I love it.

I hardly ever find Alex/Ryan one-shots.
This is quite unique.
& well written. :D

Oh my Gaskarth ! ( OmG ) Hahah.

I'm flabbergasted :DD
Call me.
Wee !

This story was amazing. I really loved it, and I don't think Alex was out of character at all. He was exactly like I'd imagine him, even down to the way he spoke and how he behaved. You don't need to be told how well you write Ryan; he's always perfectly in character, consistent yet differing for each role. It's really amazing how you do it, I'd do anything to possess that kind of talent.

‘Mommy, I want that puppy.’
‘You already have three kitties and a turtle at home.’
‘I don’t care. I want it!’

This was, rather strangely, my favourite part. At first glance, it seemed completely irrelevant, but then I realised that actually, it set the atmosphere perfectly - Alex wants it, he gets it. Simple. Ryan goes along with it.

The black permanent marker idea was really great, too; it gave it some sort of idea, however small, and was really effective. I wasn't sure how the title fitted until I read it, and I liked that. It gave nothing away.

I really love your writing, and I'm definitely going to read more.

You are a goddess.


I liked what you did with the permanent marker.

I dislike slash. I clicked it thinking it was an Alex Gaskarth story and guess what I found. It was amazing though. I loved it. It was just really well written and different.

druscilla knows.:

Pyro.:

I liked the ending too.
You wrote Alex well for someone who doesn't know much about him.
I can definately imagine him getting drunk and making vulgur remarks and all that.

Thank you.
:tehe:
A friend of mine actually said I wrote him absolutely terribly and that he's too much of a gentlemen to do those things so...

He is very nice, that's true.
But that's basically how I imagine he'd get if he were really drunk.
And well, who really knows what he's like in the bedroom. :tehe:

Pyro.:

I liked the ending too.
You wrote Alex well for someone who doesn't know much about him.
I can definately imagine him getting drunk and making vulgur remarks and all that.

Thank you.
:tehe:
A friend of mine actually said I wrote him absolutely terribly and that he's too much of a gentlemen to do those things so...

I liked the ending too.
You wrote Alex well for someone who doesn't know much about him.
I can definately imagine him getting drunk and making vulgur remarks and all that.

haha, the ending is funny.
it makes me wonder whether or not he would call.
this was a very unique plot.
<3

Oh man. I loved (l-o-v-e-d) the end. :cheese:

Heh, during that whole one-shot I was trying to figure out how you were going to incorporate a black marker. Now I am dumb struck.
Very, very good job, as usual, Dru.

Well this was... Different than I would usually ever read.
But I'm a sucker for good Ryan Ross fic.
And OH. MY.FUCKING.GOD. this was absolutely amazing.
The way Alex was behaving, so dominant, in control, making Ryan believe that he was actually doing him a favor.
I enjoyed it so very much.
xo xo

Amazing and sexy.

I loved that one shot (:

This story was awesome. I loved it!

New story.
Oneshot.
Alex Gaskarth/Ryan Ross.
PWP.
747 words.

Happy reading!

xoxox
-Dru