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  • blackplusredequalsme

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    update soon?
    August 18th, 2009 at 05:27pm
  • MirIsAMonster.

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    ha, you'd be my bestest friend if you updated.
    August 15th, 2009 at 03:38am
  • Waking.The.Fallen

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    Interesting... and pretty good story! *subscribes* YAY!
    August 13th, 2009 at 10:53pm
  • heeymorgan

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    wow : )

    more?? :L

    <33
    August 13th, 2009 at 04:06pm
  • Missy1891

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    the story is still as good as whhen it started and more lol
    keep up the fantastic work :)
    August 9th, 2009 at 09:22am
  • Elizabeth Lavenza

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    OMFG. SHE HAD HOT SEX WITH ZACKY! YAY!
    Poor Bri-Bri. Tsk, tsk. That's what you get for acting all pissy on her. Now Zacky's had her. lol. XD

    LOVED!
    August 7th, 2009 at 08:28am
  • Exodus

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    I liked the update. Though wasn't expecting the whole sex with Zacky thing. I mean I kinda was expecting something liek that with Brian but didn't think her and Zacky would get to having sex. Good add in though.
    August 4th, 2009 at 06:33am
  • Slightly_Delirious

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    I can't believe she slept with Zacky I mean Zacky is an extremely sexy man BUT she's supposed to be 'in love' with Brian! Grrr!
    Even fictional women are confusing lol!
    Update soon! =)
    July 30th, 2009 at 06:45am
  • RaindroppedRoses

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    ooooh... scandaloooous! hahaha
    July 26th, 2009 at 06:49pm
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    ohmagah
    that was a great chapter
    but what will brian think
    oh no
    July 26th, 2009 at 08:15am
  • MARE

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    did not see dat comin wow cant wait till the next ch. =))))
    July 26th, 2009 at 12:49am
  • Rath

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    That was awesome.
    Please update soon?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
    July 25th, 2009 at 05:51pm
  • Am.I.Pretty.Yet!?

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    *JESSIE!!
    July 24th, 2009 at 03:57pm
  • Am.I.Pretty.Yet!?

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    OMG ZACKY HAHA I LIKED IT YEA 4 NEVEAH ND ZACK GO JENNY!!
    July 24th, 2009 at 03:56pm
  • Woah!It'sMaddox

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    You know what? I think Zacky and Heav are meant to be! Zacky is so sweet and cute. A lot better then Brian! :D
    July 24th, 2009 at 02:49pm
  • better.than.sex

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    BAD BRIAN!!!!!!!!!! omg! how could he almost rape her!!!!
    and how dare Zack move in on her like that! lol. but
    seriously, she was two seconds short of becoming a
    rape victim, and he's all, 'i want you'. as mad as i am at
    Brian...i kinda hope he heard all that... more soon!
    July 24th, 2009 at 10:14am
  • allzac

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    omg love the book but u have to write more and fast but not to fast that it will make it sound like shit
    u guys are good
    July 24th, 2009 at 08:27am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    oh this is bad
    this is bad
    this just adds to the drama and dear lord whats going to happen next
    July 24th, 2009 at 06:26am
  • jessesgirl407

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    :O i hope brian heard, i really do, and i hope nothing too bad happens from this..... but an amazing update!!! cant wait for more
    July 24th, 2009 at 06:20am
  • blackplusredequalsme

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    Oh my gosh this chapter was ammmmmazing! I can't believe it. Update soon pleasssse! I'm dying to read more
    July 24th, 2009 at 05:59am
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