perfect ending thingy. CUTE LAME-FUNNY and ohmygosh adorable!!!!!!!!!!!! lame as in what they thought was lame. i thought the pick up line rocked. hahaha! seriously, loved the stories all the way through, i swear! :D
I love your story sooooo much, I've just finished reading them both.
i soo want joe to propose i know its a bit soon but they have been through so much more than some couples who have been together for 50 years. and they are 20
what ever you write i'm sure it will be amazing xx
im starting to think that it was a rly good idea to make a sequel in the last chapter everything was all tied up togehter it was perfect!!! so cant wait for the last few chapters!
i liked the text messages too and im happy olivia got melissa kicked out of the meeting thingy meh bob its like taking revenge and babysteps muahaha lol keep writing!!
i thought it was a cliff hanger it made you wonder what olivia was going to do next.... dun dun dunnnn hahaha i think its funny, the whole dun dun dunnn thing and the chapter was good!! its always is!!