Painful Lullaby - Comments

OMG. i think im one of the latest people to comment on this story but i loved it. i cant wait toread the sequel next. This story was absolutely driving me crazy it felt necessary that i finished it in one day. and i managed to. I must say Absolutely wonderful job!

You should totally do a sequel!!!
I love this story it was very interesting!

I VOTE SEQUEL!
oh, and next ryden update, you will have to check the author note. xD
love always,
Spunky.

wtf??? shes not prego???? that was like idk weird... anyway i have question!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ummm.... so like is roxies mom just out of the picture now i mean... like isnt she wandering where her child is i mean eventually the police will find out and she wasnt leagally allowed to leave..... so like ummm... idk lol. the update was kooly

ah. now i realize why everyone think's we're vampires, lmfao.

This story is hilarious :)

LMFAO!!!!
I remember when you did that to my face!
Good thing it was when I had my long disgusting icky nasty bitchy hair so i could cover it! But it still went away fairly quickly. xD
good update, hun <3

yayyyy i new he was gonna give her a promise ring!!! thats adorable!!!! brandys a huge slut! lmfao!!!

awww thats sweet!!! im happy jag wasnt mad at Roxie!! hes sooo sweeet!!! lol <33333

yayyy!!!!!! i think Roxie rly does wanna get married tho... but i think they r 2 young now ya no..... plus it wont even be legal! lol. but mayhbe like jag could give her a promise ring that would be cute!!!! lol. yay!!!

yayyyy!!!! they r back 2gether!!!! btw brandy is such a hoe!!!! lmao!! she like only 13 sheeshh!!! lol.

*sniffs* plzzzzz update!!! lmao. i mean it hasnt even been a day sinse i readthis but im just sooooooooooo bored lmao!

ok so i just finished!!!! btw turns out e4 i was on chapter 40 or idk lol. but thats sooooooo sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i freakin hate eva!!!!!!!!!! shes a phsyco bitch!!!!!!!! lol. omfg and she drank but shes prego i hope the babys ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story!!!!!!!!!!! yayyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!

omfg!!!!!!!!!!! im sry i just like read like idk 43 chapter and its like 4am so yaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ut i wuvvvvv this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and id just thought id tell u that i went through that twilight faze like i read twilight 8 times!!!!!!!! yes yes ima freak ut like i would white im in lovve with a fantacy character and like my dad would say katy hes not REAL he cant love u back!!!!!!! soooo... ya i was freakishly obsessed with twilight just thought id let u no! lmao. gahhhhh im not sure if i should keep reading or if i should go to bed... lol. im the only 1 awake. hehe

i love this story. i like the twist that you put in it.
Eva is a huge bitch haha

WAIT!
so if her period starts on June 6th,
and they did it the day before..
YOU GOT PREGNANT ON MY BIRTHDAY?!
NICE BIRTHDAY PRESENT, !$&#%!
hahah. jk(:

ROFLMFAO!
you do not understand how much i laughed!
xD

The sun started to rise, and all of a sudden we heard a giggling Zoe and Adam walk out of the camper together.
They both spotted me and Jag, still naked.
Adam gasped, and put his hand over his eyes, looking away.
Zoe's eyes got wide as she yelled,
"JAG! WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY VIRGIN?!"
bahah! xD
you know i would(:

your updates make me laugh!
seriously, with my taste in shorts, could possibly imagine the shortness?!
and the tightness?!
his junk would be, like, squished.
xD

Seriously, me again?

It seems like I spam too.
*pout*

Great upadate though.