Fuss - Comments

Your writing capabilities never cease to blow my mind.
I really loved this story. It was different, it was cute, and it's probably my new favorite story. My favorite like was this one: “You will be quiet. You will co-operate. I am going to give you a manicure. And you will like it.”
The setting was fantastic and so was the detail. The dialogue flowed perfectly and it was very humorous. I loved it. :D

This is absolutely amazing.
Like...seriously.
I've never read a oneshot with this much detail, and I LOVE detail.
keep it up
:D!

Okay, ummm, WOW!

Seriously, I read it and, just...wow. I'm really just kinda speechless at the moment. I love it. Like, wow.

Your descriptions and imagery really amaze me. The way you'ved worded things, it's so different from a lot of other authors and it really astounded me when I started reading. It was really, really good.

I love Jepha's and Bert's characters. The ending made me smile and laugh a lot. I love how he did the whole nose-tapping thing, it fit perfectly. I believe there's nothing to criticise with this oneshot. Nothing at all. You did such a good job with it.

Just...wow. Really well done, hun. :arms: