beautiful story line. same, as the person above, kinda some bad grammar, but hey. you've worked hard on this. and you suceeded in writing a swell story, so hats off to you. :)
Wow. I've got to say, that was really good. x] I wonder whose perspective it's in though... a stalker, maybe? xD Your sentence structures were slightly off and some point, but whatever, I'm no English master or anything.
You gotta love twitter. It helped me find this; you helped me find this. I loved it. Something that you would never expect to happen. THIS STORY IS BEAUTIFUL. Yea, that might have been a little overrated. Or not.
I can tell you worked hard.
♥