Under the Moonlight (It's Too Dark to See) - Comments

  • John Taylor

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    I love your ideas :p
    January 4th, 2012 at 12:24am
  • after all this time;

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    It was good. Update again soon :]
    January 3rd, 2010 at 10:12pm
  • kallian

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    The suspense! I loved all your chapters. :D Great job!
    hope you update soon!
    July 11th, 2009 at 03:12pm
  • PoisonPassion

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    Chapter six was good. Even if it was just a filler, liked the ending.

    Great work, keep writing!
    July 11th, 2009 at 12:47pm
  • kallian

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    I'm on chapter 1 so far, but its pretty good! *subscribes*
    July 11th, 2009 at 07:01am
  • a 6 of my heart

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    Really good update!
    Make sure you update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next!
    couldn't agree more.
    sorry it took me a while to get to it
    i've been away
    its nice to come home to a beautiful update though
    so thanks!
    June 28th, 2009 at 06:17pm
  • after all this time;

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    Really good update!
    Make sure you update soon, I'm dying to know what happens next!
    June 18th, 2009 at 04:04am
  • after all this time;

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    Very good. I can't wait to see what'll happen next.
    Keep it up
    June 16th, 2009 at 11:32pm
  • PoisonPassion

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    Really good and exciting. Cant wait to read more about what happens though, i expect it to be very good :)

    Keep writing, its awesome!
    June 16th, 2009 at 05:47pm
  • a 6 of my heart

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    omg! what the heck? why did he go all crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i know why. ahah. mad cow disease. duh. i knew that. haha. i loved it. update! update! update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 16th, 2009 at 04:03am
  • a 6 of my heart

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    okay. im going to give you my comment on the first chapter, because that's all i read............................so far!
    i love it!
    adore it!
    crazy for it!
    its soooooooooo good. soooooooooo different. its just amazing. i really like, it. now i must go and read chapter 2. i shall be back though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 16th, 2009 at 03:52am
  • Perihelion_

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    Interesting...it's a wee bit awkward for me, because the vampires only give the impression of common gangsters -- but the prose is quick and cuts to the chase smoothly enough :)
    June 14th, 2009 at 09:01am
  • amaranthine.

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    it's pretty good. I'm interested to see what happens next
    June 14th, 2009 at 09:00am
  • xxiheartuxx

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    oooh i like it =D
    June 14th, 2009 at 05:56am
  • Adam Glambert.

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    I'm gonna make the thread for this, because the last comment thread someone made kind of...never showed up.

    So...yeah! Haha.

    This is a re-post of a story that I kind of forgot and pushed aside. So enjoy! =]
    June 14th, 2009 at 02:43am