omg! what the heck? why did he go all crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i know why. ahah. mad cow disease. duh. i knew that. haha. i loved it. update! update! update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
okay. im going to give you my comment on the first chapter, because that's all i read............................so far! i love it! adore it! crazy for it! its soooooooooo good. soooooooooo different. its just amazing. i really like, it. now i must go and read chapter 2. i shall be back though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Interesting...it's a wee bit awkward for me, because the vampires only give the impression of common gangsters -- but the prose is quick and cuts to the chase smoothly enough :)