Locked Up - Comments

First of all, let me say that I enjoyed the way the title was tied up with the contect of the story so clearly, and the fact of the two of them being locked up was funny in a way and it made things interesting.

Sleeping together in the same bed as friends between a guy and a girl was something that caught my attention because the way you described it didn't point the story to them having sex like most stories on here, and that was a god bonus for your story. It was different.

I would have liked to see Mike puting more of a fight since he went to the party she was, or even later on like going to her house and stuff. It just felt we didn't have much info in order to hate the guy and completely love Van. Other than Wednesday's words of him cheating, nothing else, so it seemed a bit lacking.

I didn't like the way Wednesday disapeared, and how things ended but I gues that's why there's a sequel, right?

Thanks for sharing this. c:

-Maria.

what? NO! that wasnt supposed to happen that way!!!!
im going to go read the sequel now!!!

I'm sooo disappointed D:
no offence, but that ending has been used too many times...

i'm so glad there is going to be a sequel(: lol. i feel totally late on this because i haven't been on in a while. but it was GOOOOD.

i just read your story and i loved it. i cried when the story ended and they werent back together.

YAY!!! SEQUEL!!!!!!
happy sequel?
<3

OMFG,
YES!
:D
I'll be looking out for it, fer sure<3

OMFG,
YES!
:D
I'll be looking out for it, fer sure<3

Sequel...there must be one, 'cause that was so fucken epic I would prolly annoy you till there was a sequel.

Le means 'the' in french. xD 'it' has 8 billion forms lmao

Can't wait for the sequel!!!!

(and, there wouldn't be a le at all in the second sentence:)

okay, so i love this <3
the ending made my heart hurt :(
but i still loved it :)
please write moreeeeee!
PLEASE <<<3

if there is no sequel
i will cry
and you have 8 stars!!!

i didnt really like the ending
thats why you should do the sequal =]
thies story is way to good to just end it there

oh HELLLLL NO
NOT OKAY
NOT AT ALL OKAY
THEY SHOULD FUCKING BE TOGETHER
NOT LIKE THIS
THIS IS BAD
SEQUAL INCLUDING GETTING BACKTOGETHER IS A MUST
and possibly some really good make up sex.
BUT THE WAY IT IS CURRENTLY IS NOT GOOD.
oh and thanks for putting me in :)
i still want to kill both of them for not just getting over themselves and loving each other properly.
jesus.

Ohh! I think that you should make a Sequel!!! && if you do would be oh so kind enough to put my name in it? I would freak out && be happy for like ever! haha.. I love this story. thanks for writing it![:
<3 Rachel

Thanks for putting my name in it!!!! You better make a sequel or I'm killing you!!!! (not literally of course!)

That was an amazing story!!! I hope for a sequel and thank you who ever mentioned it, but the ending was amazing. Write A Sequel!!!!

Sigh...I think I liked the suprise...even though its sad...idk y i like tragedies..but i do...(i wrote one) It was still a really good ending to a really good story though...im hoping...no...PRAYING for a sequel...thanks to whoever mentioned that! IM WITH YOU ALL THE WAY!..PLZ PLZ PLZ!!! SEQUEL!!! YAY!!!
MTOL

Awwwww! Make a sequel or I kill you...just kidding...or am I?

I KNOW WHAT YOU DID LAST SUMMER...I love that movie =D

omg yes im marks gf!!!!!!!!!!!!!! haha lol :P i loved it

u ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY HAVE TO HAVE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

haha i loved the end tho :P but seriously make a sequel please with a cherry on top :P

& thanks for putting my name in :P :P :P :P :) :) :)