An Opening - Comments

This is a crappy comment, but I'm just letting you know I read and loved it!

Ha. Baby got a job. :D

I don't know how you could think this is crap... I absolutely love your writing; you do it so well - especially oneshots like this.
The way you describe the office and Frank and Gerard's body language subtly, yet make the reader interpret it into their imagination of the situation, almost subconsiously, is fantastic. I love it when writers can do that.
Also, I like the whole hate thing going on with Frank towards Gerard, and the sexual tension between them. It just makes the sex scene SO much better. That's another thing I love, that you understand and can achieve making a particular pace and climax in your writing and know how to set a certain mood through suitable description and dialogue.
This is one of my favourites from you, so please don't think it's crap!
Keep writing, or else something REALLY BAD is gonna happen D:
H.H
xxx

im being serious make this into a story it would be wow

lol that was good XD

'Twas great, liked it alot. I'm glad to see that you're finally on again. Please update your other stories!!!

I LOVED IT!

It was so cool how you completely got everything down and shown how each of them wanted to be precived, and how they really were.
I loved how Frank's character seemed so worried until he actually got to Gerard.
I loved it and wouldn't change any of it sweets.

And an 'opening' could be taken in another way....and I'm sure the Way in question has MANY openings to place certain items.