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  • Quinn Daniels

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    oooh love the twist :D
    December 11th, 2009 at 04:22am
  • Synlvr85

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    Loved the update!! I hope her and Bri can make it since hes gonna be a rockstar. Update sooooon!
    December 11th, 2009 at 01:04am
  • Synlvr85

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    Great chapter hun! I feel bad for Matt.. i think its his pretty eyes and dimples that make me feel that way! I hope that she can chill out on her drinking.. i don't want her to lose bri
    December 7th, 2009 at 10:20pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    That funny how Johnny was tackled by the other guys. lol
    Amazing chapter.
    November 18th, 2009 at 01:23am
  • EffieXSteffie

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    *groans* “Aww, what’s wrong?” Brian asked teasingly. “Don’t wanna play with the big boys?”
    That part reminded me completely of a friend of mine that since a couple of hours ago... I'm ignoring because of something he did... why... well, he used to call him and his friends "Tha big boys" as a crew name -___-

    But besides that tiny memory... I really liked the chapter. Poor Johnny though getting beat by Jimmy, Matt & Zack... that's unfair. It's like my best friend, she told me today that she had always thought that avenged only consisted of Jim, Matt, Zack & Bri... but one day she decided to Wikipedia them and was like, "Johnny? Who is Johnny" and came to find out that she had never noticed short shit before. *shrugs*
    Like I said... Poor Johnny.

    Excellent chapter :) I just absolutely adore this story... it made me smile when I saw the notification in my E-mail.
    November 18th, 2009 at 12:51am
  • MsSynnieVengeance

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    Weeeeee I really like this storyyyyy
    November 17th, 2009 at 09:58pm
  • False Illusions;

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    Aww.. Brian is being so sweet about her drinking problem.
    I can sense drama though.. :3
    November 17th, 2009 at 09:02pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    great update
    hopefully she does cut back on her drinking!
    November 17th, 2009 at 07:00pm
  • Quinn Daniels

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    amazing update, amazing twist :]
    October 23rd, 2009 at 04:08am
  • Synlvr85

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    WOW this chapter caught be off guard.. her and Matt..her and alcohol! Oh man.. i hope soon things start looking up. Update soon hun!
    October 21st, 2009 at 11:26pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    So her and Matt have a past together?
    Let's hope Brian doesn't find out the wrong way or he going to jump into conclusions.

    That so sweet that Brian cares about her well- being.
    Amazing chapter.
    October 21st, 2009 at 04:46pm
  • False Illusions;

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    I noticed! :]
    That was so sweet of Brian. :)
    October 21st, 2009 at 08:42am
  • EffieXSteffie

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    How didn't I guess that? (Don't answer that) Usually someones has to be all smart and say "Uh, cuz you're slow, dumbarse"

    'and those cheeky dimples'
    That part made me grin like an idiot, I remembered something my friend David does.

    I'm still mad at Matt because of another story, so I have absolutely no comment about him.
    But, Brian, as always he's cute, even when he's not even trying... God.

    And, Kim, she seriously needs to stop acting like she has a stick up her arse, it's not always, but she does it. Brian was only trying to help.
    October 21st, 2009 at 02:38am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I never expected Kim and Matt to have known each other when they were little!
    I really hope she gets some help with her alcohol problem...
    great update, cant wait for more!
    October 20th, 2009 at 10:32pm
  • RelentlessChaos

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    I just read the whole of your story so far and i fucking love it!
    I hope the band works out and kim and brian!
    Update as soon as you can please!
    xxxx
    October 14th, 2009 at 10:48pm
  • hellheartless

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    I love this. Everyone makes all the guys seem like angels and everything. I like when they are assholes. Kind of bad, huh? haha.

    Any who, very good job. Update soon! =]
    October 6th, 2009 at 02:08pm
  • False Illusions;

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    Oh deary me.
    I would have slapped him. >>
    Loved it. X3
    October 6th, 2009 at 08:17am
  • Quinn Daniels

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    beautiful new chapter!! the ending of it was faaabulous!
    October 6th, 2009 at 03:19am
  • james owen sullivan.

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    Ouch. That was a cheep shot towards kim. Matt is being a huge asshole,but that's just him I guess. Haha.
    I really hope Kim doesn't fuck things up. I really hope BRIAN doesn't fuck things up!
    Jeez,this story is genious.
    October 6th, 2009 at 01:28am
  • EffieXSteffie

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    This chapter just made me wonder... why the heck do I like Matt?
    (I think of many reasons) but dude, he's a jerk.
    Awesome chapter though.. :)
    October 5th, 2009 at 08:11pm