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  • worldclass

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    just re-read the ending. *sigh* so happy!
    And I'm so glad you went with a happy ending. I thought Carson deserved it :) It would have been interesting to know whether she just started speaking then or if she had been doing it for a while. Regardless. *love* <3
    March 11th, 2011 at 04:48am
  • owlowlowl

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    awesome story i would have actually preferred the not so happy ending :)
    but it.s good all the same
    January 9th, 2011 at 04:33am
  • shellieann

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    Great Story. Love the ending.
    January 8th, 2011 at 03:20am
  • Spirit-and-soulx12

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    Oh wow.... what an amazing ending. Just returned from holiday and best welcome home pressie ever!
    It was so well written, it really touched me!
    Well done babe...
    Wishing you the best in all your stories :D
    January 6th, 2011 at 08:06pm
  • ILiveToDie

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    I am amazed by this story. I have finished reading it and I would read it over and over if I had the time. Thank you for writing this story.
    -Alora
    December 21st, 2010 at 06:30pm
  • Bre the Human

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    I loved the ending to this!!!!! :D :D :D
    December 21st, 2010 at 12:47am
  • girlofrock101

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    OMG this is my favourite story ever!!! It's so different to what the stories on mibba are usually like! I love it :)
    December 14th, 2010 at 06:24pm
  • cobra9874

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    chapter 29 has white font too
    December 14th, 2010 at 06:26am
  • cobra9874

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    the font is white in chapter 26 too
    December 14th, 2010 at 06:21am
  • cobra9874

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    in chapter 14 the font is white so you can't read it...
    December 14th, 2010 at 06:07am
  • fallinAngell16

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    I LOVE this story! It was beautifully written and the story captured me from the moment I started it. Congratz on finishing! Amazing, AH-mazing job :)
    December 14th, 2010 at 01:08am
  • XtremeFairy

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    The ending was amazing..I love it.
    I love how they found each other again and Alex could finally tell her the truth and open up to her.
    Amazing story here :D
    December 14th, 2010 at 12:21am
  • kaiteybear

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    You couldn't have ended it any better! It was absolutely SPECTACULAR!!! Thank you so much for all the hard work you put into this story!
    Love,
    Kait
    December 13th, 2010 at 11:14pm
  • Erinnnn.xo

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    such an amazing story
    i'm sad it's over :(
    great ending!
    December 13th, 2010 at 09:18pm
  • chan chan channtiee

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    OMG wow i just finished it, it was freaking AMAZING! :D
    December 13th, 2010 at 08:21pm
  • voidoids

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    Spent an hour reading all of this. The ending was quite lovely, though you didn't explain why Carson spoke. It'd would've been even better, in my opinion at least. I love your writing style, it's captivating.
    December 13th, 2010 at 01:12pm
  • lil_angel666

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    i know i haven't been with the story for long but the ending made me smile, and in the heat of late that's a good thing!

    anyway that was great!
    December 13th, 2010 at 12:28pm
  • StarBurn

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    Chapters 15, 16, 26, and 30 are all blank. You kinda get lost without them, otherwise I really loved it!
    December 13th, 2010 at 08:52am
  • Closed Doors

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    My Gawd. I read this story from beginning to end in one sitting. I must say, I'm extremely moved by your story. It was deep, emotional, and I couldn't help but tear up a couple times. I any story you ever make is that good.
    December 13th, 2010 at 08:24am
  • Freak Out

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    i liked the ending. she finally talked! i knew it would be to alex. it makes me all warm and fuzzy inside ^.^
    December 13th, 2010 at 07:55am
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