October 26th, 2009 at 08:57pm
A few grammatical errors, which I would point out to you via message if you'd like. The use of imagery was delightful, and it is very good so far (albeit slightly short).
I would like to point out, though, that in second chapter's third paragraph has a dangling size tag.
Keep it up :).
I love the song, too. I saw them live a few weeks ago, possibly the best night of my life!
Is this discontinued?