You're Gonna Love Me - Comments

  • manmouth

    manmouth (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    84
    Location:
    Norway
    Wtf? Mibba haven't sent me any mails that you have updated your story. D:
    I missed like.. Two whole chapters! It was still great, though. :'>
    July 29th, 2009 at 01:51am
  • JustAimee

    JustAimee (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    '“Which I will,” I told him confidently. “See you later,” I smiled, and with that I headed out of his room, up the stairs and out of the front door. The truth was, I wasn’t actually all that sure I could get an A out of it. But I could hope, and if I didn’t… well I’d just lie.'

    Loved your latest update!!
    the last paragraph made me laugh!
    July 23rd, 2009 at 06:43pm
  • DustyFingers.

    DustyFingers. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    more (:
    I like it lots
    July 21st, 2009 at 01:47am
  • manmouth

    manmouth (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    84
    Location:
    Norway
    Gerard's a dumbass. : >
    July 14th, 2009 at 03:20pm
  • JustAimee

    JustAimee (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    lmao
    Frankie makes me laugh!
    :)
    July 13th, 2009 at 11:38pm
  • Devihla

    Devihla (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    Denmark
    You might not be sure, but I am! This is amazing!
    It leaves me with a cunning - almost vicious - smirk on my lips, so yeah; it's awesome!
    I can only hope for more. :D
    June 30th, 2009 at 10:33pm
  • manmouth

    manmouth (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    84
    Location:
    Norway
    ;evil laugh;
    June 30th, 2009 at 08:59pm
  • manmouth

    manmouth (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    84
    Location:
    Norway
    Aw, so cute. : >

    I have no words, wish I could write a longer comment. Great written, cute update, blahblahblah.. < 3
    June 25th, 2009 at 11:34pm
  • baysway

    baysway (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Location:
    United States
    This reminds me of one of my friends that is interested in this guy but everyone keeps saying, "You know he's straight?" His answer: "Not for long."
    June 25th, 2009 at 10:34pm
  • JustAimee

    JustAimee (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    love this story! it has so much potential, definitly worth continuing
    June 25th, 2009 at 09:08pm
  • Bleed Beautiful

    Bleed Beautiful (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    definatly worth continueing,
    June 18th, 2009 at 09:45pm
  • manmouth

    manmouth (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    84
    Location:
    Norway
    So worth it. Hahahaha, worth it. ;laughs like a maniac; I don't get why I'm saying - sorry, off topic. I just think 'worth it' sounds funny.

    Sorrysorry. Omgfgd, great story so far, really. :'>
    June 18th, 2009 at 12:55am
  • kurai-angel

    kurai-angel (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    Worth it. This is definitely a good start. On top of the fact that the plot sounds good, it was written in a prologue style very well - it sounded like the kind of prologue you'd want to read, narrated in the right tone, you know? But, do check your punctuation; I saw some undue commas.
    June 17th, 2009 at 10:55pm
  • revengefulvampire

    revengefulvampire (105)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    Yeah it was worth it i like it much! :D
    June 17th, 2009 at 10:53pm
  • Danny Hampstead

    Danny Hampstead (200)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    Definitely worth it. The start was awesome, and a great attention grabber. And I agree with OhMyKeys. about the whole story title thing. The title becomes pretty pointless when it's not incorportated into the story in some way.

    But I'm anxious as to how this story turns out.
    June 17th, 2009 at 05:09am
  • The Maine

    The Maine (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    'tis very much worth it.

    <3 update soon.
    June 16th, 2009 at 10:41pm
  • planetword

    planetword (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    It's a really good start.
    I think to make it a good story, just recheck your updates for grammar, and punctuation, etc. Also, most stories with a title like yours generally don't incorporate their title into the story, so it makes the title a bit meaningless if you get what I mean.
    I'd like to see how it turns out (:
    June 16th, 2009 at 09:58pm