November 29th, 2009 at 01:49pm
Behind Polite Smiles. - Comments
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nathen......OMG i love u. u r soooooooooo fucking great at writing i love this story write more and i think u should get it publish its that gd. u shouldn't put ur self down ur brill cant wait for the next chapter lol so get writing. i love it its so deep u can really feel the emotoins* in it god i so love uNovember 26th, 2009 at 01:03am
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(-: It's really good, can't wait for more!
*thumbs up to you*October 9th, 2009 at 10:47pm -
Chapter five is amazing too. but you have to write more!! I want to know what happens!! (: hahaOctober 1st, 2009 at 04:57pm
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Chapter four is really good. The way you describe everything is perfect and the characters all seem real. This story is very interesting. There are a few grammar errors but nothing major. Good work. (:October 1st, 2009 at 04:48pm
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i read the first three chapters and this is amazing. i love your writing. i think i already said that in my last comment but oh well (: i'm going to bed now, sadly, but i'll keep reading tomorrow.. can't wait to read more! lolOctober 1st, 2009 at 04:17am
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I only read the first paragraph (cause i'm in class, lol) but i know i'm going to read the whole thing! i love your writing style (:September 30th, 2009 at 05:01pm
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I like the next chapter, i want to more about the singer lass, she sounds cool lol. Its awesome, as usual, I couldn't have expected anything else :PSeptember 28th, 2009 at 02:11pm
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muahahahahhaahaa, i reread your story again, and its awesome, it has all the awesomeness of your writing....if that makes any sense. if not, oh wellSeptember 3rd, 2009 at 11:50am
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i wants more, now. just like, now.August 18th, 2009 at 05:52pm
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You could of told me you had the next chapter up, I mean these are the things you don't leave out in a convo damn it, Inform me next time :P
Anyways fill in chapters are awesome and sometimes needed but hurry up with the chapters, I want to know where this is going and I can't do that if you don't write lol
Why Kate by the way? Not your usual type of name? Kate, I just can't see you using a name like that lolJuly 21st, 2009 at 10:19pm -
i agree with bex, how the hell do you do it???
my story is naff compared to yours.
your just....just....well, a complete omffaging suzan headJuly 9th, 2009 at 06:54pm -
This story is so clever, how do you do it?
The guy sounds a lot like you, are you sure you didn't base this off you???
Your descriptions are amazing, you really are awesome at writing, and your not leaving it ages till the next chapter, which is awesome!!!!
Hurry with the next chapter :PJuly 5th, 2009 at 05:55pm -
Yay!!!!!!! I'm first person to comment :P
Is this story based on you???
If so are we gonna be in it???
Your descriptions are amazing, you could be a writer, and I'm not just saying that lol
Well Done!!!July 2nd, 2009 at 10:33pm
Secondly awesome!!!!
You are an amazing writer, just don't keep us in suspense for so long next time :P