Standing On Edge - Comments

I know that this is just sort of a random comment in the middle of it all: But I love that the way you write it you really feel as if you know her, the style you've used I don't quite know how to describe it but she's there in the scene thinking it through and you get what she knows and all.~ I love it. ^_^ (I guess this is a hint to upload teh next chapter lol. Kiddin.' But I would like it XD)

Well. . . we could always just forget about that part XD.
Yaya.~ Awesome chapter.^^ Hang on...
^¬^ yaya.

Haha, yeah... I am slightlyyyyyy tempted now, XD
-though I'm sure mum would KILL us from the state of her equipment/kichen afterwards ^^'

Next chapter is done.. I think =/
=D

I loved teh last chapter!~ haha I wanna try toast pizza now and teh other list of stuff that was made- you never know lol. ^_^ Next Chapter!!!!!~ Please?

I meant like everything is sort of pictured in your mind however you have to use your imagination and bairn to take in teh action to pick up clues and make guesses. In other words in a way that I like- I don't quiite know how you'd explain it all- but it's really unique and I love it as being part of your style. Some parts flow and are easy to follow where as others you have to consider more. Again- It really makes it feel far more realistic as nothing always does run smoothly like that. I don't mean it in a way that you CAN'T follow because you can, easily. I still don't know quite how you'd describe it.... But I love it. ^________^

I know, I'm checking it through nows. >w< (I haven't used that face in ages)
fnq.!~ i had to say somethin' lols.... ^-^
namida.sasayaku.

Awhhs. Hahahah speak for yourself, upcoming In Memory features that now doeeeeeesn't it. ;D

Thanks anyways. I really enjoy writing like that too, makes it less monotonous if y'know what I mean, not all 'this happened, he did that, I said that, all -ed verbs' -ugh. It's different, and I like it. Who cares if it's correct or not. It's my way of writing so hah. xP lol.

Umm, yeah that's fine. I understand. There's probably more characters to come, but no-one significant I don't think. I don't even know what's going to happen with this Zack guy tbh =/

Favourite moment in this chapter? <3
Or fave. line, in the ch. Or story over all? Just something so I know.
Others too. =)
What would you like more of, and what would you like less of? This is improvised, so I'm at your service and will be willing to try and make it more how you want. Y'know tweak the recipe a little bit. XD

Thanks again, looking forward to seeing some of your stories soon, *nudge nudge, hint hint*
-Kinny.

Oh, and when you said 'like you can't take it in' do you mean like it's a bit of guess work/things that arent that necessary are described, and some prominent things and the usual 'he said', 'she said' nonsense is left out... Or like, you can't read it easy/picture the story-take it in.? > <'

I love reading stories with tense changes because it feels more like your actually there- some things are happening (present), others have been and you think about them (past), it just feels so much more realistic. ^___^ But in another sense more confusing and almost as if you can't quite take it in which makes you read more- I really love it. ^-^

I'm not really sure of a favourite character, I think I'd have to read a bit further to really choose.

. namida.sasayaku.

<3 *0*''';;;;

I actually LOVE you.

Yes, and that's a good thing ^^' ... No, really thank you so so much!
The fact somebody has actually read that stuff, makes me so happy =)
And you're awesome anyway! XD

You do realise I'm just making this up on the spot? So I can't promise anything >_<;';
It could just all go downhill from here... or die completely. =/ That would be sad haha, especially now as you've pulled yourself through the whole thing! I feel obliged to write good stuff now > <'

Hahahah, same. Core <3 I like Devon too. (although it's more like a place name to us I guess!) They're real people tho' >///<.
And, yeah I really am something else... people try and convince me that it's a positive thing, but really I don't think I quite belong =S

Thanks anyway, I really appreciate people accepting my stuff even when it's so weird >~<
<3 Thank you Thank you! You are much loved~

i like i like i like. Okay screw that, I love it :]
It's confusing at first but then I got into it and it was really very very good.
The way you write is something else (in a most positive way)
Hehe I love his name aswell Core. :] xox

=P Ok.
Dyou have a favourite character then?

Any inklings as to who she is going to end up with/ if there is any guy for her amongst them?

Anyyyy comments and thoughts welcome. And yay! Have you noticed I'm playing with changing tenses? Which is not grammatically acceptable I don't think, but I like it. =)

Oh, and thank you for sticking by as a loyal reader >w<.

There is no criticism that's why I've said none. xP can't wait to read on the next chapter sounds greeaaattt.

Yups. Next chapter should (if it goes to plan)
-reveal more about Kristina, her family and her past
-give an update about her situation/why they are in america etc...
-and let the plot thicken with dev n core

xD

Thanks, keep commenting, and keep reading let me know what you like and what you don't. Criticism is welcome, don't be afraid to say whatever it is you want to say =)

I've said this a few times- but I'm really enjoying it still and again I'm still not too certain hoiw everything gonna work outs. >.< I can't wait for the next chapter as you says then i shouldn't have to wait all to longs then.^________________^

Wows... I really don't know what will happen next. >.< I'm really enjoying it. Glad you have a plot nowssss. Write more pleeeassseee I'm rally enjoying the story. ^^

y-yyy-you serious? Its gotta be a pretty damn boring let down! seeing as First chapter gets 22 views, which then drops to 4, then to a measly 2... T,T.

Well, my dreams aren't gonna continue the saga for me..
But I'll still use dreams as an inspiration to give it that weird druggy spaced out feel =) .

Plussss, I've got some plot now like I said, so when I get the time there'll be another 3 chapters or so added to this XD

Anyone else please give -comments, -criticism, -advice, -feedback, and whatever else =D anything here or on my profile is yummy yummy =3. (and it will mean I'll most probs check out your stuff too~)

I'm really enjoying the story. ^.^

Can't wait for more.~