Looking At Them - Comments

  • serizenna

    serizenna (100)

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    You have some gammer and spelling problems, but don't feel bad I have lots of them myself. The story in it self lacks feeling for me, but that's just my opion. Anyway you have a good story, but it needs some polshing...
    June 20th, 2009 at 12:46am