It's All In Your Head - Comments

It really wasn't clear, but I guess that was the whole point of it. It kind of made me a little sad, but I'm not sure if that was the emotion you were going for. Even if it wasn't, it was very well written. I absolutely loved it. Excellent job!

This deserves more comments than it's received so far. It was so well-written. I particularly loved the ending- it was really powerful and haunting. Like you said, it wasn't clear what was going on, but I prefer stories where the reader can make their own interpretation. Great job (:

This is really good, Drea. Sure it's kinda fuzzy and unclear, but I think that it fits the story. It brings this incoherent, foreboding mood to the plot.

Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this and hope you post some more stories in the near future. =)