Abandoned City - Comments

Another great chapter. You have me hooked!
Update soon :3

whoa. this seems really interesting. and, surprisingly, it is orignal. usually when people say it's original, its just another fanfic (not like im complaining though, look what type of stories i write) but i very much like this. you should continue!

The description in this story is beautiful. Very vivid, and I like the concept. Fantastic writing, I will be subscribing.
Keep it going! :3

Lovely imagery. I really like this story so far, good idea and well-executed. Keep it up :)

This is very interesting, I like it xD
It's a great idea so far, I can't wait to see where it goes.

Just letting you know though, if you didn't know already, neuve isn't actually a french word...the word for nine in french is neuf. Maybe you already knew that though :)

Keep it up though -subscribes-

Very cool. I'm liking the world you've constructed so far. This kinda has an atmosphere of Maximum Ride meets City of Ember, with a healthy dash of hard reality.

Nice. I can't wait to see what comes next! *subscribes*

This is very interesting, and original. It's a good idea and, so far, a well-executed one. I like it - subscribed.